Hello, SSL WIKI24, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions.
I noticed that one of the first articles you edited was Shoppers Stop, which appears to be dealing with a topic with which you may have a conflict of interest. In other words, you may find it difficult to write about that topic in a neutral and objective way, because you are, work for, or represent, the subject of that article. Your recent contributions may have already been undone for this very reason.
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One rule we do have in connection with conflicts of interest is that accounts used by more than one person will unfortunately be blocked from editing. Wikipedia generally does not allow editors to have usernames which imply that the account belongs to a company or corporation. If you have a username like this, you should request a change of username or create a new account. (A name that identifies the user as an individual within a given organization may be OK.)
In addition, if you receive, or expect to receive, compensation for any contribution you make, you must disclose your employer, client, and affiliation to comply with our terms of use and our policy on paid editing.
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- Best practices for editors with close associations
- The five pillars of Wikipedia
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Apparition11
Complaints/
Mistakes
03:26, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
Please do not add promotional material to Wikipedia, as you did to
Shoppers Stop. While
objective prose about beliefs, organisations, people, products or services is acceptable, Wikipedia is not
a vehicle for soapboxing, advertising or promotion. Thank you.
Apparition11
Complaints/
Mistakes
11:29, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
- There's no promotional material added. It's purely update about the organization which needs to be done time to time.
SSL WIKI24 (
talk)
13:10, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
- If you believe that statements such as "India's premier retailer", "boasting an extensive presence", "collectively spanning an impressive...", "Renowned for its commitment to customer satisfaction", "nation's beloved loyalty program", "pioneering shopping assistance service", and "remains dedicated to delivering unparalleled customer delight" are neutral and not promotional, then I would question your ability to write a neutral encyclopedia. Advertising or PR would much better fit this writing style.
Apparition11
Complaints/
Mistakes
01:22, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
- Hi, Please take a look at below content. Kindly suggest if this can be updated.
- Shoppers Stop is a leading Indian omnichannel retail chain that caters to the diverse needs of customers across the country. Established in 1991, Shoppers Stop has evolved into one of India's leading retail destinations, renowned for its wide array of products, exceptional customer service, and commitment to quality. Extensively present across 107 department stores in 56 cities as of December 31, 2023, Founded by Mr. K. Raheja Corp Group, the brand is one of India's leading conglomerates, with a vision to redefine the retail landscape in India. Since its inception, the company has grown from strength to strength, expanding its presence across various cities and regions in India. Shoppers Stop offers a comprehensive retail experience, providing customers with access to a diverse range of products including apparel, accessories, cosmetics, fragrances, home décor, and more.
- GSSB: Global SSBeauty Brands Limited is a subsidiary of Shoppers Stop, dedicated to curating and offering an extensive range of beauty and cosmetic products to customers across India. Established to cater to the growing demand for premium beauty brands, Global SSBeauty Brands Limited has emerged as a key player in the beauty retail sector. Global SSBeauty Brands Limited prides itself on offering a curated selection of international and domestic beauty brands, ranging from skincare and makeup to haircare and fragrances. With a focus on quality and innovation, the company ensures that customers have access to the latest trends and cutting-edge products in the world of beauty and cosmetics.
SSL WIKI24 (
talk)
05:43, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
- No. Literally and without exaggeration, not a single sentence of that is appropriate.
Apparition11
Complaints/
Mistakes
11:26, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
- How about this?
- Shoppers Stop is an Indian retail chain founded in 1991 and owned by the K. Raheja Corp Group. The company operates department stores across India, offering a range of products including apparel, accessories, cosmetics, fragrances, and home décor items. As of December 31, 2023, Shoppers Stop operates 107 department stores across 56 cities. The company has experienced consistent growth since its inception, expanding its presence in various regions throughout India. Shoppers Stop provides customers with a comprehensive retail experience, offering a wide range of products, including apparel, accessories, cosmetics, fragrances, and home décor.
- Global SSBeauty Brands Limited operates as a subsidiary of Shoppers Stop, focusing on curating and providing an assortment of beauty and cosmetic products to customers throughout India. The establishment of this subsidiary was driven by the increasing demand for premium beauty brands, positioning Global SSBeauty Brands Limited as a significant player in the beauty retail sector.
- Dedicated to delivering a curated collection, Global SSBeauty Brands Limited takes pride in offering a diverse range of international and domestic beauty brands. The product offerings span various categories, including skincare, makeup, haircare, and fragrances. The company places a strong emphasis on quality and innovation, ensuring that customers have access to the latest trends and cutting-edge products in the realm of beauty and cosmetics.
SSL WIKI24 (
talk)
12:39, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
- There are some slight improvements, but still no. As long as you are writing to convey the company's viewpoint, it won't be acceptable. Wikipedia articles should be written from content derived from and sourced by reliable, third-party sources. I have left a welcome template above that contains links that will help you understand Wikipedia guidelines and policies better. If you have any further questions, you are welcome t ask at the WP:TEAHOUSE. Apparition11 Complaints/ Mistakes 03:32, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
- No. Literally and without exaggeration, not a single sentence of that is appropriate.
Apparition11
Complaints/
Mistakes
11:26, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
- If you believe that statements such as "India's premier retailer", "boasting an extensive presence", "collectively spanning an impressive...", "Renowned for its commitment to customer satisfaction", "nation's beloved loyalty program", "pioneering shopping assistance service", and "remains dedicated to delivering unparalleled customer delight" are neutral and not promotional, then I would question your ability to write a neutral encyclopedia. Advertising or PR would much better fit this writing style.
Apparition11
Complaints/
Mistakes
01:22, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
As previously advised, your edits give the impression you have a financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's
mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. You were asked to cease editing until you responded by either stating that you are not being directly or indirectly compensated for your edits, or by complying with the mandatory requirements under the
Wikimedia Terms of Use that you disclose your employer, client and affiliation. Again, you can post such a disclosure on your user page at
User:SSL WIKI24, and the template {{
Paid}} can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form: {{paid|user=SSL WIKI24|employer=InsertName|client=InsertName}}. Please respond before making any other edits to Wikipedia.
Edwardx (
talk)
10:54, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, SSL WIKI24, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions.
I noticed that one of the first articles you edited was Shoppers Stop, which appears to be dealing with a topic with which you may have a conflict of interest. In other words, you may find it difficult to write about that topic in a neutral and objective way, because you are, work for, or represent, the subject of that article. Your recent contributions may have already been undone for this very reason.
To reduce the chances of your contributions being undone, you might like to draft your revised article before submission, and then ask me or another editor to proofread it. See our help page on userspace drafts for more details. If the page you created has already been deleted from Wikipedia, but you want to save the content from it to use for that draft, don't hesitate to ask anyone from this list and they will copy it to your user page.
One rule we do have in connection with conflicts of interest is that accounts used by more than one person will unfortunately be blocked from editing. Wikipedia generally does not allow editors to have usernames which imply that the account belongs to a company or corporation. If you have a username like this, you should request a change of username or create a new account. (A name that identifies the user as an individual within a given organization may be OK.)
In addition, if you receive, or expect to receive, compensation for any contribution you make, you must disclose your employer, client, and affiliation to comply with our terms of use and our policy on paid editing.
Here are some pages that you might find helpful:
- Best practices for editors with close associations
- The five pillars of Wikipedia
- Contributing to Wikipedia
- Tutorial
- How to edit a page and How to develop articles
- How to create your first article (using the Article Wizard if you wish)
- Simplified Manual of Style
- The Teahouse, our help forum for new editors
I hope you enjoy editing here and being a
Wikipedian! Please
sign your messages on
talk pages using four
tildes (~~~~); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, visit
the Teahouse, check out
Wikipedia:Questions, ask me on
my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place {{Help me}} before the question. Again, welcome!
Apparition11
Complaints/
Mistakes
03:26, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
Please do not add promotional material to Wikipedia, as you did to
Shoppers Stop. While
objective prose about beliefs, organisations, people, products or services is acceptable, Wikipedia is not
a vehicle for soapboxing, advertising or promotion. Thank you.
Apparition11
Complaints/
Mistakes
11:29, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
- There's no promotional material added. It's purely update about the organization which needs to be done time to time.
SSL WIKI24 (
talk)
13:10, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
- If you believe that statements such as "India's premier retailer", "boasting an extensive presence", "collectively spanning an impressive...", "Renowned for its commitment to customer satisfaction", "nation's beloved loyalty program", "pioneering shopping assistance service", and "remains dedicated to delivering unparalleled customer delight" are neutral and not promotional, then I would question your ability to write a neutral encyclopedia. Advertising or PR would much better fit this writing style.
Apparition11
Complaints/
Mistakes
01:22, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
- Hi, Please take a look at below content. Kindly suggest if this can be updated.
- Shoppers Stop is a leading Indian omnichannel retail chain that caters to the diverse needs of customers across the country. Established in 1991, Shoppers Stop has evolved into one of India's leading retail destinations, renowned for its wide array of products, exceptional customer service, and commitment to quality. Extensively present across 107 department stores in 56 cities as of December 31, 2023, Founded by Mr. K. Raheja Corp Group, the brand is one of India's leading conglomerates, with a vision to redefine the retail landscape in India. Since its inception, the company has grown from strength to strength, expanding its presence across various cities and regions in India. Shoppers Stop offers a comprehensive retail experience, providing customers with access to a diverse range of products including apparel, accessories, cosmetics, fragrances, home décor, and more.
- GSSB: Global SSBeauty Brands Limited is a subsidiary of Shoppers Stop, dedicated to curating and offering an extensive range of beauty and cosmetic products to customers across India. Established to cater to the growing demand for premium beauty brands, Global SSBeauty Brands Limited has emerged as a key player in the beauty retail sector. Global SSBeauty Brands Limited prides itself on offering a curated selection of international and domestic beauty brands, ranging from skincare and makeup to haircare and fragrances. With a focus on quality and innovation, the company ensures that customers have access to the latest trends and cutting-edge products in the world of beauty and cosmetics.
SSL WIKI24 (
talk)
05:43, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
- No. Literally and without exaggeration, not a single sentence of that is appropriate.
Apparition11
Complaints/
Mistakes
11:26, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
- How about this?
- Shoppers Stop is an Indian retail chain founded in 1991 and owned by the K. Raheja Corp Group. The company operates department stores across India, offering a range of products including apparel, accessories, cosmetics, fragrances, and home décor items. As of December 31, 2023, Shoppers Stop operates 107 department stores across 56 cities. The company has experienced consistent growth since its inception, expanding its presence in various regions throughout India. Shoppers Stop provides customers with a comprehensive retail experience, offering a wide range of products, including apparel, accessories, cosmetics, fragrances, and home décor.
- Global SSBeauty Brands Limited operates as a subsidiary of Shoppers Stop, focusing on curating and providing an assortment of beauty and cosmetic products to customers throughout India. The establishment of this subsidiary was driven by the increasing demand for premium beauty brands, positioning Global SSBeauty Brands Limited as a significant player in the beauty retail sector.
- Dedicated to delivering a curated collection, Global SSBeauty Brands Limited takes pride in offering a diverse range of international and domestic beauty brands. The product offerings span various categories, including skincare, makeup, haircare, and fragrances. The company places a strong emphasis on quality and innovation, ensuring that customers have access to the latest trends and cutting-edge products in the realm of beauty and cosmetics.
SSL WIKI24 (
talk)
12:39, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
- There are some slight improvements, but still no. As long as you are writing to convey the company's viewpoint, it won't be acceptable. Wikipedia articles should be written from content derived from and sourced by reliable, third-party sources. I have left a welcome template above that contains links that will help you understand Wikipedia guidelines and policies better. If you have any further questions, you are welcome t ask at the WP:TEAHOUSE. Apparition11 Complaints/ Mistakes 03:32, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
- No. Literally and without exaggeration, not a single sentence of that is appropriate.
Apparition11
Complaints/
Mistakes
11:26, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
- If you believe that statements such as "India's premier retailer", "boasting an extensive presence", "collectively spanning an impressive...", "Renowned for its commitment to customer satisfaction", "nation's beloved loyalty program", "pioneering shopping assistance service", and "remains dedicated to delivering unparalleled customer delight" are neutral and not promotional, then I would question your ability to write a neutral encyclopedia. Advertising or PR would much better fit this writing style.
Apparition11
Complaints/
Mistakes
01:22, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
As previously advised, your edits give the impression you have a financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's
mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. You were asked to cease editing until you responded by either stating that you are not being directly or indirectly compensated for your edits, or by complying with the mandatory requirements under the
Wikimedia Terms of Use that you disclose your employer, client and affiliation. Again, you can post such a disclosure on your user page at
User:SSL WIKI24, and the template {{
Paid}} can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form: {{paid|user=SSL WIKI24|employer=InsertName|client=InsertName}}. Please respond before making any other edits to Wikipedia.
Edwardx (
talk)
10:54, 18 March 2024 (UTC)