Hi, only just found your comment. That sounds to me like a poor, near-copyvio piece of editing, in that case. Why don't you rewrite the section along the lines you suggest? The article is much in need of attention. All the best --- Chiswick Chap ( talk) 07:40, 5 May 2013 (UTC)
Hi, only just found your comment. That sounds to me like a poor, near-copyvio piece of editing, in that case. Why don't you rewrite the section along the lines you suggest? The article is much in need of attention. All the best --- Chiswick Chap ( talk) 07:40, 5 May 2013 (UTC)