comment from Gfanucci
Hi, be sure to add imbedded links in your text. For example, the average person will not know what apoptosis means, and you should see if there is a page that exists to explain it. I suggest linking to topics within your text. You seem to have added a lot and some nice images.-- Gfanucci ( talk) 19:14, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
Having looked through the formatting and structure of the article, it appears well done. My only suggestion is to reformat the placement of the images. The images themselves appear to be fine, but they are placed so that they border text on the right and the left, called "sandwiching" the text. This is a particular concern in the Metabolism and catabolism section. You have several options:
- Remove one or two of the images.
- Decrease the size of the images from 500 or 300 pixels to one that will allow all the images to be a consistent size.
- Keep the images that are integral to the understanding of the concept near the text, and put others in a gallery. The link will show you how. I placed the images in the Structure section in a gallery. You can undo my changes if you wish, but this assists with the layout of the article.
Let me know if you have questions. -- Moni3 ( talk) 13:00, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
comment from Gfanucci
Hi, be sure to add imbedded links in your text. For example, the average person will not know what apoptosis means, and you should see if there is a page that exists to explain it. I suggest linking to topics within your text. You seem to have added a lot and some nice images.-- Gfanucci ( talk) 19:14, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
Having looked through the formatting and structure of the article, it appears well done. My only suggestion is to reformat the placement of the images. The images themselves appear to be fine, but they are placed so that they border text on the right and the left, called "sandwiching" the text. This is a particular concern in the Metabolism and catabolism section. You have several options:
- Remove one or two of the images.
- Decrease the size of the images from 500 or 300 pixels to one that will allow all the images to be a consistent size.
- Keep the images that are integral to the understanding of the concept near the text, and put others in a gallery. The link will show you how. I placed the images in the Structure section in a gallery. You can undo my changes if you wish, but this assists with the layout of the article.
Let me know if you have questions. -- Moni3 ( talk) 13:00, 27 April 2009 (UTC)