{{ helpme}} Hello (July 2021. As an editor with no experience apart from one article in 2008 I would be very grateful for help with the article in my sandbox at RJalan/sandbox, particularly but not only with a) The opening paragraphs which replace the shorter text which was rejected by UnitedStatesian (is it clear now what SfB is and why it was created?) b) The references: are there enough and do they work properly? Please could you read the text (not the tables) and tell me about poor grammar or anything which is not clear - or should be deleted. Thank you very much!! Alan ( talk) 14:59, 16 July 2021 (UTC) Hello (September 2021) Clearly there is a lot to do to the SfB article and I regret that I have not worked on it for some time, due to a broken wrist. I hope I may be given time when I have recovered in the autumn/winter to make a further submission. Alan ( talk) 11:01, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
2008: Hello. I would be grateful for help in marking up this article, particularly on references. Reference 2 accounts for most of the text - have I indicated this adequately? Also, the three references are also the three external links and it would seem neater to bring them together, so can the external links be intergrated with the reference text? Alan ( talk) 18:14, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
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I would much appreciate help with this article (The SfB Classification) from an experienced editor: a read through, checking the references (are there enough?) and in particular, does my revised text adequately deal with the criticism from UnitedStatesian? Alan ( talk) 14:42, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot ( talk) 14:01, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot ( talk) 20:02, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
Hello, RJalan. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, " sandbox".
In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.
Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 23:13, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
{{ helpme}} Hello (July 2021. As an editor with no experience apart from one article in 2008 I would be very grateful for help with the article in my sandbox at RJalan/sandbox, particularly but not only with a) The opening paragraphs which replace the shorter text which was rejected by UnitedStatesian (is it clear now what SfB is and why it was created?) b) The references: are there enough and do they work properly? Please could you read the text (not the tables) and tell me about poor grammar or anything which is not clear - or should be deleted. Thank you very much!! Alan ( talk) 14:59, 16 July 2021 (UTC) Hello (September 2021) Clearly there is a lot to do to the SfB article and I regret that I have not worked on it for some time, due to a broken wrist. I hope I may be given time when I have recovered in the autumn/winter to make a further submission. Alan ( talk) 11:01, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
2008: Hello. I would be grateful for help in marking up this article, particularly on references. Reference 2 accounts for most of the text - have I indicated this adequately? Also, the three references are also the three external links and it would seem neater to bring them together, so can the external links be intergrated with the reference text? Alan ( talk) 18:14, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
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Hello, RJalan!
Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the
Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the
Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there!
UnitedStatesian (
talk)
15:47, 16 June 2021 (UTC)
|
This help request has been answered. If you need more help, you can , contact the responding user(s) directly on their user talk page, or consider visiting the Teahouse. |
I would much appreciate help with this article (The SfB Classification) from an experienced editor: a read through, checking the references (are there enough?) and in particular, does my revised text adequately deal with the criticism from UnitedStatesian? Alan ( talk) 14:42, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
Hello, RJalan. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:The SfB classification for building, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.
If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.
Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot ( talk) 14:01, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
Hello, RJalan. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that User:RJalan/sandbox, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.
If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.
Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot ( talk) 20:02, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
Hello, RJalan. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, " sandbox".
In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.
Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 23:13, 4 February 2022 (UTC)