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Hi Nathan. I hope you are fine. If you are not too busy, may i ask you to craft a section for the video which will talk about its content, i mean the dance influences etc. Please let me know. Jivesh • Talk2Me 15:25, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
Please please please participate here. Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:38, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
Yes, i have very good ones. Should i give them to you? Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:40, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
Should i also give you the links foe the teasers. They have a lot of information.
And please see if you can craft a better synopsis as well. I know i am asking for too much but i will be very very very very very happy if you could do that for me. Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:43, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
All the sources i am giving you have important points but it depends on how you are going to fit them in the music video section. That's the real challenge. I think there are too many costume changes. Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:46, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
Well i do not know if i can cal that epic. But what is for sure is that i enjoyed the video but i did not like the ending. It was too simple. I do not want to get hyperexcited but the song has surged from #173 to #38 on iTunes. If you want more sources to expand the synopsis, have a look at the music video section for 'background'. It has many references about the teasers from MTV news and much more. They may help a lot. Thanks for everything Nathan,. I hope i am not boring you.
Jivesh •
Talk2Me
19:09, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
I am off to bed now. I am so impatient to see your work tomorrow. Take care. See you. I know you will leave me amazed with what you will do. Jivesh • Talk2Me 19:10, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
I have left more links and please take notes that several critics are saying that the video has a "post-apocalypse/Mad Max-style" I do not know about that but it should be important. It could fit in the "Content" section i asked you for. I saw you have already started to write the synopsis. Thanks. The video has received a lot of coverage. I do not know how you will fir all these information: by making a separate content section or simply fitting everything in the synopsis but i think two separate sections will be good. Jivesh • Talk2Me 07:00, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
Please put your two cents into the jukebox. I Help, When I Can. [12] 22:47, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
Would this be a good addition? Novice7 ( talk) 13:30, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
Hi Nathan. Haven't heard form you since so long my friend.... Are you fine? Jivesh • Talk2Me 06:33, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
Oh yessss I am a massive fan of Mariah. I would like to join :) calvin999 ( talk) 13:38, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
Review completed (i believe), please message me once the issue are completed as i do not watch subpages; thank you. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 07:34, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
What do you mean by copy-edited? calvin999 ( talk) 16:05, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
Gosh it really pisses me off when people write about selling a song at iTunes.... and I archived a few of the undated messages on your talk page (two of them by me sorry :P). Adabow ( talk · contribs) 06:44, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
This made me laugh lol, i dont get insulted over someone's opinion goof ;) (unlike most people on here *doesn't state specific name of user i am not fond of* =P) - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 22:52, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
Regarding this: the reason I reverted it from the article is because it never stated that the album has sold 2 million copies. It said that 2.1 million were already shipped to retailers, to be sold (haven't even been certified yet). The article was published 3 days after the albums release, so it could not have known about certifications so early. Also, the second source linked back to Wikipedia. =)
PS:Thanks for your input at Adele's album FA. Much appreciated. =) Orane (talk) 07:56, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
Review will begin soon, in the next few days. look out for a reply. — Lil_℧niquℇ №1 [talk] 01:33, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
Hi, I've read your GA review and have addressed your points, I was wondering if you would be able to go over it before I submit for GA again and tell me of any outstanding issues? calvin999 ( talk) 19:00, 4 June 2011 (UTC)
Hello Nathan! Nice to see ya around. I know you stay in Miami, FL. I was wondering if your local library had the book The Instrumentalist volume 41 (does your library come up on searching here?) If so, can you please get it for me? Psst, do they allow scanning? I don't think they would, but if they do, can you scan the page of "How Will I Know" for me? If possible, Modern Drummer volume 12 ( [1]) too. Thanks in advance! Novice7 ( talk) 12:50, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, as usual, for the review. Everything is addressed (either done or contested). Adabow ( talk · contribs) 23:57, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
I have addressed all but one of your points from the S&M GA 1 Review, could you check the ones I have put a " Done" by please?
calvin999 (
talk)
14:36, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
Hi Nathan, are you looking forward to the new MC album? Got any info about it for me? :) Jayy008 ( talk) 18:45, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
Hey, ok thanks. Yeah I created a Peer Review for S&M so that anyone could tell me (apart from the references) what else needed to be done, as I have addressed all your points GA Review 1 as well as from GA Review 2. I need time to go through 140 references lol. And for H.A.T.E.U., there is no more info on the web, literally what you see is there is what there is. There was probably more info when the song and video released, but they are long gone now. calvin999 ( talk) 09:17, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
That comment above was for H.A.T.E.U., this one is for S&M lol (didn't see the your comment about it until i had responded about H.A.T.E.U.). I know that everything in a GA Review is for the articles interest, I just found the referencing comment a bit vague (and the other reviewer). Does saying "The reference section needs work" mean all 140+ references need correcting, or only ones from a certain section, and what specifically is wrong? Wrong order, missed out access date or something else etc. It's only because I haven't done this before, that I don't know what "reference section needs work" means and entails. calvin999 ( talk) 22:39, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
Isn't this repeated twice on Britney's discography page, or I am blind? -- demis talk 11:13, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
From where? Jivesh • Talk2Me 08:14, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
To start work on Charmbracelet. I've collected a few sources and will begin on June 13, 2011, promise! Btw, did you get the books (with info on "How Will I Know")? Also, I'll compile the article in my sandbox and then paste it into your sandbox?? What do you say?? As you can see, I make a lot of grammar errors (and still do. Even this message might have millions of errors, lol). Novice7 ( talk) 10:56, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
![]() | This is an archive of past discussions. Do not edit the contents of this page. If you wish to start a new discussion or revive an old one, please do so on the current talk page. |
Archive 10 | ← | Archive 12 | Archive 13 | Archive 14 | Archive 15 | Archive 16 | → | Archive 20 |
Hi Nathan. I hope you are fine. If you are not too busy, may i ask you to craft a section for the video which will talk about its content, i mean the dance influences etc. Please let me know. Jivesh • Talk2Me 15:25, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
Please please please participate here. Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:38, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
Yes, i have very good ones. Should i give them to you? Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:40, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
Should i also give you the links foe the teasers. They have a lot of information.
And please see if you can craft a better synopsis as well. I know i am asking for too much but i will be very very very very very happy if you could do that for me. Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:43, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
All the sources i am giving you have important points but it depends on how you are going to fit them in the music video section. That's the real challenge. I think there are too many costume changes. Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:46, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
Well i do not know if i can cal that epic. But what is for sure is that i enjoyed the video but i did not like the ending. It was too simple. I do not want to get hyperexcited but the song has surged from #173 to #38 on iTunes. If you want more sources to expand the synopsis, have a look at the music video section for 'background'. It has many references about the teasers from MTV news and much more. They may help a lot. Thanks for everything Nathan,. I hope i am not boring you.
Jivesh •
Talk2Me
19:09, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
I am off to bed now. I am so impatient to see your work tomorrow. Take care. See you. I know you will leave me amazed with what you will do. Jivesh • Talk2Me 19:10, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
I have left more links and please take notes that several critics are saying that the video has a "post-apocalypse/Mad Max-style" I do not know about that but it should be important. It could fit in the "Content" section i asked you for. I saw you have already started to write the synopsis. Thanks. The video has received a lot of coverage. I do not know how you will fir all these information: by making a separate content section or simply fitting everything in the synopsis but i think two separate sections will be good. Jivesh • Talk2Me 07:00, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
Please put your two cents into the jukebox. I Help, When I Can. [12] 22:47, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
Would this be a good addition? Novice7 ( talk) 13:30, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
Hi Nathan. Haven't heard form you since so long my friend.... Are you fine? Jivesh • Talk2Me 06:33, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
Oh yessss I am a massive fan of Mariah. I would like to join :) calvin999 ( talk) 13:38, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
Review completed (i believe), please message me once the issue are completed as i do not watch subpages; thank you. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 07:34, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
What do you mean by copy-edited? calvin999 ( talk) 16:05, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
Gosh it really pisses me off when people write about selling a song at iTunes.... and I archived a few of the undated messages on your talk page (two of them by me sorry :P). Adabow ( talk · contribs) 06:44, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
This made me laugh lol, i dont get insulted over someone's opinion goof ;) (unlike most people on here *doesn't state specific name of user i am not fond of* =P) - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 22:52, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
Regarding this: the reason I reverted it from the article is because it never stated that the album has sold 2 million copies. It said that 2.1 million were already shipped to retailers, to be sold (haven't even been certified yet). The article was published 3 days after the albums release, so it could not have known about certifications so early. Also, the second source linked back to Wikipedia. =)
PS:Thanks for your input at Adele's album FA. Much appreciated. =) Orane (talk) 07:56, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
Review will begin soon, in the next few days. look out for a reply. — Lil_℧niquℇ №1 [talk] 01:33, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
Hi, I've read your GA review and have addressed your points, I was wondering if you would be able to go over it before I submit for GA again and tell me of any outstanding issues? calvin999 ( talk) 19:00, 4 June 2011 (UTC)
Hello Nathan! Nice to see ya around. I know you stay in Miami, FL. I was wondering if your local library had the book The Instrumentalist volume 41 (does your library come up on searching here?) If so, can you please get it for me? Psst, do they allow scanning? I don't think they would, but if they do, can you scan the page of "How Will I Know" for me? If possible, Modern Drummer volume 12 ( [1]) too. Thanks in advance! Novice7 ( talk) 12:50, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, as usual, for the review. Everything is addressed (either done or contested). Adabow ( talk · contribs) 23:57, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
I have addressed all but one of your points from the S&M GA 1 Review, could you check the ones I have put a " Done" by please?
calvin999 (
talk)
14:36, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
Hi Nathan, are you looking forward to the new MC album? Got any info about it for me? :) Jayy008 ( talk) 18:45, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
Hey, ok thanks. Yeah I created a Peer Review for S&M so that anyone could tell me (apart from the references) what else needed to be done, as I have addressed all your points GA Review 1 as well as from GA Review 2. I need time to go through 140 references lol. And for H.A.T.E.U., there is no more info on the web, literally what you see is there is what there is. There was probably more info when the song and video released, but they are long gone now. calvin999 ( talk) 09:17, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
That comment above was for H.A.T.E.U., this one is for S&M lol (didn't see the your comment about it until i had responded about H.A.T.E.U.). I know that everything in a GA Review is for the articles interest, I just found the referencing comment a bit vague (and the other reviewer). Does saying "The reference section needs work" mean all 140+ references need correcting, or only ones from a certain section, and what specifically is wrong? Wrong order, missed out access date or something else etc. It's only because I haven't done this before, that I don't know what "reference section needs work" means and entails. calvin999 ( talk) 22:39, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
Isn't this repeated twice on Britney's discography page, or I am blind? -- demis talk 11:13, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
From where? Jivesh • Talk2Me 08:14, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
To start work on Charmbracelet. I've collected a few sources and will begin on June 13, 2011, promise! Btw, did you get the books (with info on "How Will I Know")? Also, I'll compile the article in my sandbox and then paste it into your sandbox?? What do you say?? As you can see, I make a lot of grammar errors (and still do. Even this message might have millions of errors, lol). Novice7 ( talk) 10:56, 12 June 2011 (UTC)