MEWOW!
AdnaloyMTA (
talk)
14:40, 27 September 2012 (UTC)
Hi! I'm in the anthropology class at MTA working on wikipedia articles. I chose yours to review. I see you have added a couple new sections which is awesome. I found your article pretty informative for such a small physical area.
The article itself was written fairly well. I did correct a few minor things like punctuation and capitalizing. I also editing a couple run-on sentences.
Keep up the good work though! I really like how you added a gallery.
Sarmariemack ( talk) 03:52, 12 November 2012 (UTC)
Hi! I see you also edited my article! Thank you for your review. :) Sarmariemack ( talk) 16:23, 15 November 2012 (UTC)
MEWOW!
AdnaloyMTA (
talk)
14:40, 27 September 2012 (UTC)
Hi! I'm in the anthropology class at MTA working on wikipedia articles. I chose yours to review. I see you have added a couple new sections which is awesome. I found your article pretty informative for such a small physical area.
The article itself was written fairly well. I did correct a few minor things like punctuation and capitalizing. I also editing a couple run-on sentences.
Keep up the good work though! I really like how you added a gallery.
Sarmariemack ( talk) 03:52, 12 November 2012 (UTC)
Hi! I see you also edited my article! Thank you for your review. :) Sarmariemack ( talk) 16:23, 15 November 2012 (UTC)