Hello, while this is a good start, you weaken your case by not providing a clear WP:Lead section.
Wikipedia articles are not simply chronological, your very first paragraph should succinctly explain why the subject is important and worth reading about. For comparison, note that the article Abraham Lincoln starts out "was an American president" and not "was born in a log cabin".
Please head up your article with a brief intro paragraph, such is standard in every other Wikipedia biography. Otherwise a reviewer has to go squinting through your article to figure out why this guy is even worth writing about, which does not get you a strong start. MatthewVanitas ( talk) 20:34, 16 September 2013 (UTC)
You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.
Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!
MatthewVanitas ( talk) 16:57, 17 September 2013 (UTC)
Hello, while this is a good start, you weaken your case by not providing a clear WP:Lead section.
Wikipedia articles are not simply chronological, your very first paragraph should succinctly explain why the subject is important and worth reading about. For comparison, note that the article Abraham Lincoln starts out "was an American president" and not "was born in a log cabin".
Please head up your article with a brief intro paragraph, such is standard in every other Wikipedia biography. Otherwise a reviewer has to go squinting through your article to figure out why this guy is even worth writing about, which does not get you a strong start. MatthewVanitas ( talk) 20:34, 16 September 2013 (UTC)
You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.
Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!
MatthewVanitas ( talk) 16:57, 17 September 2013 (UTC)