The content looks good. The only things I would suggest working on would be the lead (see WP:LEAD) and the article's headlines, which should use the == Headline name == format to build a table of contents. Then work on the references (putting them into standard {{ cite}} form). Otherwise, you should be just fine. Let me know if you have more questions. — Mono· nomic 15:47, 24 March 2010 (UTC) reply