Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Johannes Maximilian were: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Johannes ( Talk) ( Contribs) ( Articles) 15:33, 8 October 2023 (UTC) reply

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Mio Pang Fei. Thanks! Johannes ( Talk) ( Contribs) ( Articles) 16:06, 11 October 2023 (UTC) reply