{{ helpme}} Hello, This is the first major edit I have attempted for Wikipedia so before I move it out of my sandbox and to Charles Hazlewood's current article I would appreciate any feedback about what I have done right and what I have done wrong, so I can make the article as good as possible! Thank you in advance-- Megs91 ( talk) 17:38, 13 November 2009 (UTC)
Hi m.o.p thanks for such constructive criticism. I was a bit concerned about sounding biased so I will try re-wording some of the phrases. I have been struggling to find that review from the Times, too. I believe the reviewer was Stephen Pettitt but I am not sure. Please do make any changes you see fit! Megs91 ( talk) 10:28, 16 November 2009 (UTC)
{{ helpme}} Hello, This is the first major edit I have attempted for Wikipedia so before I move it out of my sandbox and to Charles Hazlewood's current article I would appreciate any feedback about what I have done right and what I have done wrong, so I can make the article as good as possible! Thank you in advance-- Megs91 ( talk) 17:38, 13 November 2009 (UTC)
Hi m.o.p thanks for such constructive criticism. I was a bit concerned about sounding biased so I will try re-wording some of the phrases. I have been struggling to find that review from the Times, too. I believe the reviewer was Stephen Pettitt but I am not sure. Please do make any changes you see fit! Megs91 ( talk) 10:28, 16 November 2009 (UTC)