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I would suggest using more scholarly sources and adding more about the history/origins of the Protocol, significant impacts it has made and key individuals or groups involved — Preceding unsigned comment added by Okim12 ( talk • contribs) 04:57, 29 November 2017 (UTC)
| This user is a student editor in University_of_California_Berkeley/Development_and_the_Environment_(Fall_2017) . |
I would suggest using more scholarly sources and adding more about the history/origins of the Protocol, significant impacts it has made and key individuals or groups involved — Preceding unsigned comment added by Okim12 ( talk • contribs) 04:57, 29 November 2017 (UTC)