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Hello! Lisa A. Banner,
I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the
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FoCuSandLeArN (
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17:03, 4 July 2014 (UTC)
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Hello, Lisa A. Banner. I wanted to let you know that I’m proposing an article that you started, Dean Dempsey, for deletion because it's a biography of a living person that lacks references. If you don't want Dean Dempsey to be deleted, please add a reference to the article.
If you don't understand this message, you can leave a note on my talk page.
Thanks, Benboy00 ( talk) 23:28, 4 July 2014 (UTC)
Thanks for your commendation! Good luck with your submission, and let me know if you need help at all. Regards, FoCuSandLeArN ( talk) 15:20, 6 July 2014 (UTC)
Hello Lisa. I have removed the proposed deletion as there were sources for the article. However, it's going to need a huge amount of work to bring it up to an acceptable standard. I've signalled the main issues at the top of the page. These will alert other editors who may be able to help with the article. Please do not remove them until the issues have been fully rectified by either you or other editors. Until you improve the referencing rather than simply copying his CV from his own website, it may well be nominated for a deletion discussion. I'm pretty sure that he would pass the notability criteria if his work is held in permanent collections, but you need completely independent sources to verify this. So far, the only sources in the article are his website, the website of the magazine backing his film and asking for finance help from readers for the post-production work, and an interview where he talks about himself in a relatively minor publication. More importantly I have removed the section on the film as it was a copyright infringement. Please see my comments and linked guidelines at Talk:Dean Dempsey and take them on board. Best wishes, Voceditenore ( talk) 16:58, 6 July 2014 (UTC)
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~ Anastasia ( talk) 00:10, 7 July 2014 (UTC)
Hi Lisa, me again. I've referenced and copyedited the Dean Dempsey myself to bring up to minimum standards. I've removed the maintenance tags apart from the Exhibitions section which still needs references for quite a few of the shows. See also my comments at Talk:Dean Dempsey re Further reading. He sounds like a fascinating artist, although he is still very young and at the start of his career.
For your future articles, take it slow. Draft them carefully in your user space and make sure they comply with all our requirements before you put them into actual article space. The guide Wikipedia:Your first article is a great place to start, and don't worry too much about Wikipedia syntax and formatting. Mistakes there are easily fixed by editors who specialise in copy-editing articles. Other things are much more important....
Anyhow, hope that helps and welcome to Wikipedia. If you need any further help or advice, don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Voceditenore ( talk) 14:02, 7 July 2014 (UTC)
Hello Lisa. Me yet again. I just wanted to say thank you for your kind words and the barnstar. I had been away all of August and am still catching up. I hope you'll return to editing here some day. There are still a lot of gaps in our coverage of visual artists and their work and many fascinating topics to work on. Best wishes, Voceditenore ( talk) 07:18, 15 September 2014 (UTC)
Hello Lisa A. Banner. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled " sandbox".
The page will shortly be deleted. If you plan on editing the page to address the issues raised when it was declined and resubmit it, simply {{db-afc}}
or {{db-g13}}
code. Please note that Articles for Creation is not for indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia
mainspace.
If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you want to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by one of two methods (don't do both): 1) follow the instructions at
WP:REFUND/G13, or 2) copy this code: {{subst:Refund/G13|User:Lisa A. Banner/sandbox}}
, paste it in the edit box at
this link, and click "Save page". An administrator will in most cases undelete the submission.
Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo ( talk) 20:32, 9 February 2015 (UTC)
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Hello! Lisa A. Banner,
I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the
Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the
Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there!
FoCuSandLeArN (
talk)
17:03, 4 July 2014 (UTC)
|
Hello, Lisa A. Banner. I wanted to let you know that I’m proposing an article that you started, Dean Dempsey, for deletion because it's a biography of a living person that lacks references. If you don't want Dean Dempsey to be deleted, please add a reference to the article.
If you don't understand this message, you can leave a note on my talk page.
Thanks, Benboy00 ( talk) 23:28, 4 July 2014 (UTC)
Thanks for your commendation! Good luck with your submission, and let me know if you need help at all. Regards, FoCuSandLeArN ( talk) 15:20, 6 July 2014 (UTC)
Hello Lisa. I have removed the proposed deletion as there were sources for the article. However, it's going to need a huge amount of work to bring it up to an acceptable standard. I've signalled the main issues at the top of the page. These will alert other editors who may be able to help with the article. Please do not remove them until the issues have been fully rectified by either you or other editors. Until you improve the referencing rather than simply copying his CV from his own website, it may well be nominated for a deletion discussion. I'm pretty sure that he would pass the notability criteria if his work is held in permanent collections, but you need completely independent sources to verify this. So far, the only sources in the article are his website, the website of the magazine backing his film and asking for finance help from readers for the post-production work, and an interview where he talks about himself in a relatively minor publication. More importantly I have removed the section on the film as it was a copyright infringement. Please see my comments and linked guidelines at Talk:Dean Dempsey and take them on board. Best wishes, Voceditenore ( talk) 16:58, 6 July 2014 (UTC)
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Welcome to the Teahouse Badge |
Awarded to editors who have introduced themselves at the
Wikipedia Teahouse. Guest editors with this badge show initiative and a great drive to
learn how to edit Wikipedia. | |
Thank you for introducing yourself and contributing to Wikipedia! If you have any questions feel free to drop me a line at
my talk page. Happy Editing!
|
~ Anastasia ( talk) 00:10, 7 July 2014 (UTC)
Hi Lisa, me again. I've referenced and copyedited the Dean Dempsey myself to bring up to minimum standards. I've removed the maintenance tags apart from the Exhibitions section which still needs references for quite a few of the shows. See also my comments at Talk:Dean Dempsey re Further reading. He sounds like a fascinating artist, although he is still very young and at the start of his career.
For your future articles, take it slow. Draft them carefully in your user space and make sure they comply with all our requirements before you put them into actual article space. The guide Wikipedia:Your first article is a great place to start, and don't worry too much about Wikipedia syntax and formatting. Mistakes there are easily fixed by editors who specialise in copy-editing articles. Other things are much more important....
Anyhow, hope that helps and welcome to Wikipedia. If you need any further help or advice, don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Voceditenore ( talk) 14:02, 7 July 2014 (UTC)
Hello Lisa. Me yet again. I just wanted to say thank you for your kind words and the barnstar. I had been away all of August and am still catching up. I hope you'll return to editing here some day. There are still a lot of gaps in our coverage of visual artists and their work and many fascinating topics to work on. Best wishes, Voceditenore ( talk) 07:18, 15 September 2014 (UTC)
Hello Lisa A. Banner. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled " sandbox".
The page will shortly be deleted. If you plan on editing the page to address the issues raised when it was declined and resubmit it, simply {{db-afc}}
or {{db-g13}}
code. Please note that Articles for Creation is not for indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia
mainspace.
If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you want to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by one of two methods (don't do both): 1) follow the instructions at
WP:REFUND/G13, or 2) copy this code: {{subst:Refund/G13|User:Lisa A. Banner/sandbox}}
, paste it in the edit box at
this link, and click "Save page". An administrator will in most cases undelete the submission.
Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo ( talk) 20:32, 9 February 2015 (UTC)