I started review your CDR draft, trying to help you out, only to find that the very same day you went ahead and just copy-pasted the entire draft into articlespace, "publishing" it. The article is not even slightly ready for publication, which is the entire point of asking for review of a draft. Now I have to go clean up a publicly-viewable article, because it was prematurely published. Please use the WP:Articles for creation process, rather than posting new articles that aren't ready. MatthewVanitas ( talk) 16:04, 17 January 2014 (UTC) reply

The article Child death review has been proposed for deletion because of the following concern:

This article was prematurely moved out of AFC, it is not at all ready, and somehow lost every single one of its footnotes in the process. The AFC draft (which is somewhat better but still needs work) is at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Child Death Review.

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Please consider improving the article to address the issues raised. Removing {{proposed deletion/dated}} will stop the proposed deletion process, but other deletion processes exist. In particular, the speedy deletion process can result in deletion without discussion, and articles for deletion allows discussion to reach consensus for deletion. MatthewVanitas ( talk) 16:06, 17 January 2014 (UTC) reply

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! MatthewVanitas ( talk) 16:10, 17 January 2014 (UTC) reply

Hello! Linda Potter, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there!

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Hello Linda Potter. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled " Child death review".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo ( talk) 13:48, 17 August 2014 (UTC) reply