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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 13:41, 27 August 2018 (UTC)
I feel like most of the words that were in parentheses towards the beginning of the article Human Services was not needed only because if they needed to know this information, it could have a link to the actual word to further explain what the word means and synonyms it consists of. However the editor attached a source next to the word "accountability". [1] There was minimal citing of the sources in this text which troubles the audience because they don't know where this information is coming from. Transitional phrases can be added in because "The" is getting too repetitive being mentioned throughout the text. I feel like the link to "community college" was not really useful because it did not deeply describe what a community college was.____Kalynnmc, September 5 2018, 9:58
Hi! Where are you trying to add this into the article? That may make a difference. Also, I have some notes for you:
I hope that this all helps! Shalor (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 18:35, 11 December 2018 (UTC)
This user is a student editor in Xavier_University_of_Louisiana/Human_Rights_in_Global_History_-02_(Fall_2018) . |
Hello, Kalynnmc, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 13:41, 27 August 2018 (UTC)
I feel like most of the words that were in parentheses towards the beginning of the article Human Services was not needed only because if they needed to know this information, it could have a link to the actual word to further explain what the word means and synonyms it consists of. However the editor attached a source next to the word "accountability". [1] There was minimal citing of the sources in this text which troubles the audience because they don't know where this information is coming from. Transitional phrases can be added in because "The" is getting too repetitive being mentioned throughout the text. I feel like the link to "community college" was not really useful because it did not deeply describe what a community college was.____Kalynnmc, September 5 2018, 9:58
Hi! Where are you trying to add this into the article? That may make a difference. Also, I have some notes for you:
I hope that this all helps! Shalor (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 18:35, 11 December 2018 (UTC)