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Hello, Juliepersonne2. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, " Jinny's Kitchen".
In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.
Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. ✗ plicit 02:30, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.
The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. This is a great rating for a new article, and places it among the top 20% of accepted submissions — kudos to you! You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.
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Qcne (talk) 18:24, 21 May 2024 (UTC)Hi! Here's some stuff regarding the edits I made to Jinny's Kitchen, a page that you made. It's a nice article, but I feel like there are some things you need to know. I'll try to explain why I made the changes I did, because a small edit summary definitely wouldn't fit all of this!
First off, you should place your references like this, after the period.[1] Don't place them like this, before the period[1]. (The relevant guideline is MOS:CITEPUNCT—these pages that start with WP link to Wikipedia guidelines or essays, and links beginning with MOS go to pages in the Wikipedia Manual of Style.) Also keep the formatting of the cast members' names consistent—Kim Tae-hyung's has the syllables in his name spaced apart, while Choi Woo-shik's is smushed together and Lee Seo-jin's name is separated by a hyphen. I unified all of these to hyphens because it just looks better.
The changes in the list of episodes were 1. to correct grammar and make wording more natural and 2. to remove editorializing. Since I haven't watched the show, I don't know if my changes made the summaries less accurate to its content, but compare the sentences "The tasks keep piling up on interns Tae Hyung and Wooshik on whom fatigue is really starting to take its toll" and "The interns Tae-hyung and Woo-shik's tasks continue, and they start to feel tired". The dramatic (sorry, couldn't find a better word) language in the first sentence seems much less fit to Wikipedia's sterile, neutral writing style. The pages WP:EMPHATIC and MOS:WTW explain this well.
I removed the mention in the lead of the Friday timeslot because, as MOS:TV states, "Days or timeslots are not inherently notable, but if covering a series that switches these during its run, it may be helpful to note them for each season."
Lastly, this page made by a Wikipedia user has some really nice resources on copyediting, the art of making one's writing less clunky and easier to understand. If you aim to be a Wikipedia contributor, you'll need to get used to writing well so that editors like me don't have to clean up the tracks. The Manual of Style is also a must-read for new contributors. I see you're a rather new editor, so I'm giving you some advice as someone who knows the ropes. Wuju Daisuki ( talk) 01:24, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
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Hello, Juliepersonne2!
Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the
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WikiOriginal-9 (
talk) 05:40, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
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Hello, Juliepersonne2. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, " Jinny's Kitchen".
In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.
Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. ✗ plicit 02:30, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.
The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. This is a great rating for a new article, and places it among the top 20% of accepted submissions — kudos to you! You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.
If you have any questions, you are welcome to ask at the help desk. Once you have made at least 10 edits and had an account for at least four days, you will have the option to create articles yourself without posting a request to Articles for creation.
If you would like to help us improve this process, please consider
.Thanks again, and happy editing!
Qcne (talk) 18:24, 21 May 2024 (UTC)Hi! Here's some stuff regarding the edits I made to Jinny's Kitchen, a page that you made. It's a nice article, but I feel like there are some things you need to know. I'll try to explain why I made the changes I did, because a small edit summary definitely wouldn't fit all of this!
First off, you should place your references like this, after the period.[1] Don't place them like this, before the period[1]. (The relevant guideline is MOS:CITEPUNCT—these pages that start with WP link to Wikipedia guidelines or essays, and links beginning with MOS go to pages in the Wikipedia Manual of Style.) Also keep the formatting of the cast members' names consistent—Kim Tae-hyung's has the syllables in his name spaced apart, while Choi Woo-shik's is smushed together and Lee Seo-jin's name is separated by a hyphen. I unified all of these to hyphens because it just looks better.
The changes in the list of episodes were 1. to correct grammar and make wording more natural and 2. to remove editorializing. Since I haven't watched the show, I don't know if my changes made the summaries less accurate to its content, but compare the sentences "The tasks keep piling up on interns Tae Hyung and Wooshik on whom fatigue is really starting to take its toll" and "The interns Tae-hyung and Woo-shik's tasks continue, and they start to feel tired". The dramatic (sorry, couldn't find a better word) language in the first sentence seems much less fit to Wikipedia's sterile, neutral writing style. The pages WP:EMPHATIC and MOS:WTW explain this well.
I removed the mention in the lead of the Friday timeslot because, as MOS:TV states, "Days or timeslots are not inherently notable, but if covering a series that switches these during its run, it may be helpful to note them for each season."
Lastly, this page made by a Wikipedia user has some really nice resources on copyediting, the art of making one's writing less clunky and easier to understand. If you aim to be a Wikipedia contributor, you'll need to get used to writing well so that editors like me don't have to clean up the tracks. The Manual of Style is also a must-read for new contributors. I see you're a rather new editor, so I'm giving you some advice as someone who knows the ropes. Wuju Daisuki ( talk) 01:24, 22 May 2024 (UTC)