3 pages considering editing for project: autism, autism spectrum, writing process, all to try and get content going about teaching writing to students on the spectrum, esp. adapting pedagogies we're familiar with and adapting them for these students. Jonahkasha ( talk) 16:15, 9 February 2012 (UTC)
A couple of things I would suggest:
1) There are some sentences, like the first sentence that feel very subjective. One way to change the tone of these would be to eliminate queue words like "in fact" or "challenging", and try to remain more objective. Its really tough, I know!
2) Have you considered breaking down your larger section into multiple areas of thought (methods, theories, key studies, etc)?
Really good start, and great idea! DerelictDante ( talk) 01:50, 23 February 2012 (UTC)
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Ladyof Shalott 01:57, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
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Hi! Please take a few minutes to fill out this survey about the Wikipedia Education Program. This is our opportunity to improve the program and resources we provide students, so your feedback and input is integral to our future success. Thank you so much! JMathewson (WMF) ( talk) 22:57, 22 May 2012 (UTC)
3 pages considering editing for project: autism, autism spectrum, writing process, all to try and get content going about teaching writing to students on the spectrum, esp. adapting pedagogies we're familiar with and adapting them for these students. Jonahkasha ( talk) 16:15, 9 February 2012 (UTC)
A couple of things I would suggest:
1) There are some sentences, like the first sentence that feel very subjective. One way to change the tone of these would be to eliminate queue words like "in fact" or "challenging", and try to remain more objective. Its really tough, I know!
2) Have you considered breaking down your larger section into multiple areas of thought (methods, theories, key studies, etc)?
Really good start, and great idea! DerelictDante ( talk) 01:50, 23 February 2012 (UTC)
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Ladyof Shalott 01:57, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
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Hello! Jonahkasha,
you are invited to join other new editors and friendly hosts in the
Teahouse. An awesome place to meet people, ask questions and learn more about Wikipedia. Please join us!
Sarah (
talk)
14:28, 21 March 2012 (UTC)
|
Hi! Please take a few minutes to fill out this survey about the Wikipedia Education Program. This is our opportunity to improve the program and resources we provide students, so your feedback and input is integral to our future success. Thank you so much! JMathewson (WMF) ( talk) 22:57, 22 May 2012 (UTC)