First, welcome to Wikipedia! (A more formal welcome will likely appear here soon - and it usually contains some useful material, so you might want to watch for it). It's always good to have thoughtful new editors.
Your editorial additions to the article were excellent, I thought. Those of us who are professionally involved with PTSD (I treat it) may not know of the references you added, and they at not trivial, so it's good to have them. I modified the text a bit simply to merge this good material more smoothly into the narrative flow of the article. I hope this makes sense to you.
By the way, if you wish to reply to this, please do so here, to preserve the discussion thread. I'll be watching this page for a while, so I won't miss it.
Thank you for your addition to the article!
Tom Cloyd ( talk) 17:54, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
Thank you for your comments to me, Tom. And I agree that your revision makes the text a bit less awkward and flow more logically. I'm new at this, so your help is appreciated! Jfricker111 ( talk) 18:21, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
Hi! I would like to inform you that the Articles for Creation submission which was previously located here: User:Jfricker111/Jon Elhai has been moved to Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Jon Elhai, this move was made automatically and doesn't affect your article, if you have any questions please ask on my talk page! Have a nice day. Petan-Bot ( talk) 02:21, 8 October 2011 (UTC)
Thank you for helping Wikipedia!
First, welcome to Wikipedia! (A more formal welcome will likely appear here soon - and it usually contains some useful material, so you might want to watch for it). It's always good to have thoughtful new editors.
Your editorial additions to the article were excellent, I thought. Those of us who are professionally involved with PTSD (I treat it) may not know of the references you added, and they at not trivial, so it's good to have them. I modified the text a bit simply to merge this good material more smoothly into the narrative flow of the article. I hope this makes sense to you.
By the way, if you wish to reply to this, please do so here, to preserve the discussion thread. I'll be watching this page for a while, so I won't miss it.
Thank you for your addition to the article!
Tom Cloyd ( talk) 17:54, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
Thank you for your comments to me, Tom. And I agree that your revision makes the text a bit less awkward and flow more logically. I'm new at this, so your help is appreciated! Jfricker111 ( talk) 18:21, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
Hi! I would like to inform you that the Articles for Creation submission which was previously located here: User:Jfricker111/Jon Elhai has been moved to Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Jon Elhai, this move was made automatically and doesn't affect your article, if you have any questions please ask on my talk page! Have a nice day. Petan-Bot ( talk) 02:21, 8 October 2011 (UTC)
Thank you for helping Wikipedia!