Welcome to Wikipedia! Romaine ( talk) 14:41, 6 November 2015 (UTC)
- You can find the course page here: Wikipedia:Education program/Maastricht University/Autumn 2015. Romaine ( talk) 14:41, 6 November 2015 (UTC)
Hi Ivanna, about the state of the contribution in your sandbox by now, I want to make the following general remarks:
- Really good overview. Compact but clear. Well done. Congrats.
- it's not yet really “embedded” in Wikipedia:
- a. by giving wikilinks to e.g.: Web 2.0, YouTube, Myspace, etc.....
- b. and next: by embedding it in other Wikipedia-lemmata, like Social web, and of course in The Culture of Connectivity and José van Dijck and Connectivity.
- the text lacks “critical” views, e.g. of Andrew Keen: critic of social exhibitionism etc.
- the lead paragraph might perhaps be a little bit more “general” and shorter.
- it would be very fine if you could find the first (scholarly) use of “connectivity”. Who used the term first? In what context?
- might need some cleaning on style, syntax and typing errors.
It is really a pity that I can't be in your class next Friday. Good luck with the job! -- Dick Bos ( talk) 18:43, 24 November 2015 (UTC)
I moved the draft in your sandbox to Connectivity (media). Greetz, -- Dick Bos ( talk) 11:43, 6 September 2016 (UTC)
Welcome to Wikipedia! Romaine ( talk) 14:41, 6 November 2015 (UTC)
- You can find the course page here: Wikipedia:Education program/Maastricht University/Autumn 2015. Romaine ( talk) 14:41, 6 November 2015 (UTC)
Hi Ivanna, about the state of the contribution in your sandbox by now, I want to make the following general remarks:
- Really good overview. Compact but clear. Well done. Congrats.
- it's not yet really “embedded” in Wikipedia:
- a. by giving wikilinks to e.g.: Web 2.0, YouTube, Myspace, etc.....
- b. and next: by embedding it in other Wikipedia-lemmata, like Social web, and of course in The Culture of Connectivity and José van Dijck and Connectivity.
- the text lacks “critical” views, e.g. of Andrew Keen: critic of social exhibitionism etc.
- the lead paragraph might perhaps be a little bit more “general” and shorter.
- it would be very fine if you could find the first (scholarly) use of “connectivity”. Who used the term first? In what context?
- might need some cleaning on style, syntax and typing errors.
It is really a pity that I can't be in your class next Friday. Good luck with the job! -- Dick Bos ( talk) 18:43, 24 November 2015 (UTC)
I moved the draft in your sandbox to Connectivity (media). Greetz, -- Dick Bos ( talk) 11:43, 6 September 2016 (UTC)