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19:27, 10 January 2010 (UTC)
I just reviews and edited the Mairoon Ali article you created. it looks like a pretty good job, overall, particularly for your first edit to Wikipedia.
Some minor issues:
None of the above are major, but they should be corrected if possible.
I removed terms like "celebrated icon", "much celebrated actress", and "famous soca artiste". These are what Wikipedia calls peacock terms -- such terms implicitly express an opinion without citing it. Wikipedia articles should be written from a neutral point of view, not the POV of a fan or an opponent.
I hope this is helpful. DES (talk) 19:50, 10 January 2010 (UTC)
Welcome!
Hello, Harry000, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:
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DES
(talk)
19:27, 10 January 2010 (UTC)
I just reviews and edited the Mairoon Ali article you created. it looks like a pretty good job, overall, particularly for your first edit to Wikipedia.
Some minor issues:
None of the above are major, but they should be corrected if possible.
I removed terms like "celebrated icon", "much celebrated actress", and "famous soca artiste". These are what Wikipedia calls peacock terms -- such terms implicitly express an opinion without citing it. Wikipedia articles should be written from a neutral point of view, not the POV of a fan or an opponent.
I hope this is helpful. DES (talk) 19:50, 10 January 2010 (UTC)