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For Wiki 5, you seem to have put a comment in the article's Talk Page, and then deleted it. I found the comment by looking at the Talk Page's history. It looks good, overall. You could have been a little more concrete in what you plan to add (as opposed to what is wrong with the article, which is what you explain in most of your comment). And a more precise reference (year, book title) would help people know what exact text you plan to use. Chapmansh ( talk) 21:15, 10 May 2017 (UTC)
| This user is a student editor in
Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/Chapman_University/3,000_Years_of_Jewish_History_(Spring_2017). Student assignments should always be carried out using a course page set up by the instructor. It is usually best to develop assignments in your sandbox. After evaluation, the additions may go on to become a Wikipedia article or be published in an existing article. |
For Wiki 5, you seem to have put a comment in the article's Talk Page, and then deleted it. I found the comment by looking at the Talk Page's history. It looks good, overall. You could have been a little more concrete in what you plan to add (as opposed to what is wrong with the article, which is what you explain in most of your comment). And a more precise reference (year, book title) would help people know what exact text you plan to use. Chapmansh ( talk) 21:15, 10 May 2017 (UTC)