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Please move your journals. — Grlucas ( talk) 11:46, 26 August 2019 (UTC)
Please move your journals. — Grlucas ( talk) 11:46, 26 August 2019 (UTC)
You have no doubt seen my recent comments at User talk:Shalor (Wiki Ed) about your journals. I deleted three of them and have had a touch of conscience about doing so. I have emailed their text to you so that you can grade them. — RHaworth ( talk · contribs) 01:34, 25 August 2019 (UTC)
I recommend you to install the MediaWiki software on one of your university's servers. Your students can create their journals there without fear of interruption by busybodies like me. — RHaworth ( talk · contribs) 08:09, 25 August 2019 (UTC)
See here for my main reply. You may thank Thomas Smith for bringing your journals to my attention - see this exchange. He had made a complete false start at category:T. Smith HUMN 4472 Journal and I had deleted it. He was foolish enough to complain to me about the deletion without realising that he had created his journal in the correct place a week earlier. — RHaworth ( talk · contribs) 11:01, 26 August 2019 (UTC)
I know that we are to do feed back for others articles but how do I see the feedback that my peers have given for my article. Also in the revision process are we to only revise our contributions to the articles or the entire article? -- Deja.Sams ( talk) 17:20, 18 November 2019 (UTC)
Hi! I noticed that Blusolace is taking one of your courses, and I saw their edits to The Entire History of You. Unfortunately, I have had to remove a lot of the content as it does not quite meet Wikipedia's guidelines. As this is a high-profile page, with roughly 1000 pageviews per day, there is less leniency on content being added that is still a work in progress, or fails some of our rules.
As I understand that the content added by the student may be perfectly fine for the purposes of the educational course, I recommend that the student copy over their version of the page, found here, to a page in their userspace, like User:Blusolace/The Entire History of You, where they can continue editing their work. I am happy to integrate any of their additions which conform to Wikipedia's guidelines once the assignment is over.
I have also left the user a message here. Thanks! — Bilorv ( talk) 12:18, 26 November 2019 (UTC)
You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.
Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!
MurielMary ( talk) 09:30, 24 December 2019 (UTC)Just did a quick review of the article. Yes it is now a C-Class article.
I am confused about one thing why is it that the paragraph about Norman Mailer: Works and Days (2000) comes after 2014?
I feel the structure needs work, also usually bios when they reach the featured article status (but not always) start with three meaty paragraph on the subject.
Never the less good job devoting yourself to an article. You clearly deserve lots of props for it.
If its ok with you could you give me your feedback on the Brandon Lee article on which I've spend load of time.
Happy holidays. Filmman3000 ( talk) 22:38, 24 December 2019 (UTC)
@ JenniferMGA, Bdokolasa, Lizrileymga, LauraT2020, Dcb1986, KatieRob27, OrchardBreeze, Amdoubleu, Benjamin Fincher, Acmunoz14, Qtwinbush45, Pfowler17, Ereed23, Bamcclure18, Kerrymonique, Ab1g81aL93, and Markerman76: Class, please do not journal on Wikipedia. It is against the policy and could cause the class some difficulty (it happened last semester). If you must keep a journal, do so off of Wikipedia, please. I would ask that you take a look at the 3Cs Log assignment again. It is not a journal assignment. Everything you post should be about improving Wikipedia in some way. Please see WP:NOTWEBHOST and read it carefully.
When you have read this post, please acknowledge below. I am also happy to discuss this further. Thank you. — Grlucas ( talk) 22:52, 21 January 2020 (UTC)
@ JenniferMGA, Lizrileymga, Dcb1986, KatieRob27, OrchardBreeze, Amdoubleu, Benjamin Fincher, Acmunoz14, Qtwinbush45, Pfowler17, Ereed23, Bamcclure18, Kerrymonique, Ab1g81aL93, and Markerman76: I have posted about your midterm grades. — Grlucas ( talk) 17:14, 31 January 2020 (UTC)
@ JenniferMGA, Lizrileymga, Dcb1986, KatieRob27, OrchardBreeze, Amdoubleu, Benjamin Fincher, Acmunoz14, Qtwinbush45, Pfowler17, Ereed23, Bamcclure18, Kerrymonique, Ab1g81aL93, Markerman76, and Soudeaforbes: We are about finished with the class! You all should feel proud of what you've accomplished so far on Wikipedia, and this week (by 2/26) you need to submit what you've done for evaluation. Once you have posted your reflexive statement on your talk page (see the syllabus—it should detail your major contributions to Wikipedia over the last few weeks, including appropriate links—especially to your individual project article), post a link to it below. Please do this last as an indication that you're ready for evaluation. We still have a week, so keep working and asking questions to make your work the best it can be. I truly look forward to seeing your final products. — Grlucas ( talk) 11:36, 20 February 2020 (UTC)
@ JenniferMGA, Lizrileymga, Dcb1986, KatieRob27, OrchardBreeze, Amdoubleu, Benjamin Fincher, Acmunoz14, Qtwinbush45, Pfowler17, Ereed23, Bamcclure18, Kerrymonique, Markerman76, and Soudeaforbes: Thanks, all. As I evaluate, I’m leaving comments here. I'm proceeding in order of submission above. If I missed anything or seem unfair, please post here or shoot me an email. Again, well done, all. You should be proud of your work in the class and your support of the Wikipedia community. — Grlucas ( talk) 15:56, 27 February 2020 (UTC)
I see what you're doing, Dr. Lucas--thanks. I'm working on one of your students' DYK nominations ( Template:Did you know nominations/Madwoman (book)); I suppose for them the whole thing is over now that that portion of your class is over. Anyway, I'll try to get it on the front page anyway, so you can add that to your Wikipedia user page and to your annual evaluation. ;) Drmies ( talk) 14:56, 7 March 2020 (UTC) |
Hi, Dr. Lucas! This is Kaitlyn Kelly in your Senior Seminar Course on Tuesday's @ 9:30. In class on Tuesday, 3/10/2020, you stated that part one of our wikipedia article, Hamlet on the Holodeck was a bit too long. I have made revisions to that section of the article to where it's short, sweet and straight to the point. I was wondering would you mind taking a look at the article so that I can know whether if it's still too long, too short, etc.I do plan on adding maybe a few more sentences to discuss the last bit of the chapter. I just wanted your opinion. Here's the link to our article. Draft: Hamlet on the Holodeck Kaitlyn.Kelly ( talk) 02:28, 14 March 2020 (UTC)
My dissertation follows the growth of graffiti in New York City from child's play to an original art. [1]
Good evening@ Grlucas:, I wanted you to be aware that I had rewritten two main sections under our article from two of my group members. Their contributions lacked sources, citations, and I noticed direct copying of sentences from the book. After thorough editing and revising, I was notified that a random user had undone my edits. Their reason was because I didn't provide a better description as to my edits. (I believed I had). I noticed this occurred after I had also edited the Lead. Well, after a little while, I went back and undone what this random user had done. I left the Lead alone this time because I'm afraid it'll trigger that user to come back and perhaps block me or worse, delete all my work again. The good news is that I know you're able to go into my history and see this crazy exchange. I just wanted to take the initiative and make you aware. I appreciate you and your time. Besides the random users deleting my work, this new Wiki experience was a fun adventure. KRCPhilmon ( talk) 03:42, 6 May 2020 (UTC)
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The article cites "Lennon (2018, pp. 3–37)" but no such source is listed in bibliography. Can you please add? Also, suggest installing a script to highlight such errors in the future. All you need to do is copy and paste importScript('User:Svick/HarvErrors.js'); // Backlink: [[User:Svick/HarvErrors.js]]
to
your common.js page. Thanks,
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talk)
20:45, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
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This page is an archive of past discussions. Do not edit the contents of this page. If you wish to start a new discussion or revive an old one, please do so on the current talk page. |
Please move your journals. — Grlucas ( talk) 11:46, 26 August 2019 (UTC)
Please move your journals. — Grlucas ( talk) 11:46, 26 August 2019 (UTC)
You have no doubt seen my recent comments at User talk:Shalor (Wiki Ed) about your journals. I deleted three of them and have had a touch of conscience about doing so. I have emailed their text to you so that you can grade them. — RHaworth ( talk · contribs) 01:34, 25 August 2019 (UTC)
I recommend you to install the MediaWiki software on one of your university's servers. Your students can create their journals there without fear of interruption by busybodies like me. — RHaworth ( talk · contribs) 08:09, 25 August 2019 (UTC)
See here for my main reply. You may thank Thomas Smith for bringing your journals to my attention - see this exchange. He had made a complete false start at category:T. Smith HUMN 4472 Journal and I had deleted it. He was foolish enough to complain to me about the deletion without realising that he had created his journal in the correct place a week earlier. — RHaworth ( talk · contribs) 11:01, 26 August 2019 (UTC)
I know that we are to do feed back for others articles but how do I see the feedback that my peers have given for my article. Also in the revision process are we to only revise our contributions to the articles or the entire article? -- Deja.Sams ( talk) 17:20, 18 November 2019 (UTC)
Hi! I noticed that Blusolace is taking one of your courses, and I saw their edits to The Entire History of You. Unfortunately, I have had to remove a lot of the content as it does not quite meet Wikipedia's guidelines. As this is a high-profile page, with roughly 1000 pageviews per day, there is less leniency on content being added that is still a work in progress, or fails some of our rules.
As I understand that the content added by the student may be perfectly fine for the purposes of the educational course, I recommend that the student copy over their version of the page, found here, to a page in their userspace, like User:Blusolace/The Entire History of You, where they can continue editing their work. I am happy to integrate any of their additions which conform to Wikipedia's guidelines once the assignment is over.
I have also left the user a message here. Thanks! — Bilorv ( talk) 12:18, 26 November 2019 (UTC)
You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.
Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!
MurielMary ( talk) 09:30, 24 December 2019 (UTC)Just did a quick review of the article. Yes it is now a C-Class article.
I am confused about one thing why is it that the paragraph about Norman Mailer: Works and Days (2000) comes after 2014?
I feel the structure needs work, also usually bios when they reach the featured article status (but not always) start with three meaty paragraph on the subject.
Never the less good job devoting yourself to an article. You clearly deserve lots of props for it.
If its ok with you could you give me your feedback on the Brandon Lee article on which I've spend load of time.
Happy holidays. Filmman3000 ( talk) 22:38, 24 December 2019 (UTC)
@ JenniferMGA, Bdokolasa, Lizrileymga, LauraT2020, Dcb1986, KatieRob27, OrchardBreeze, Amdoubleu, Benjamin Fincher, Acmunoz14, Qtwinbush45, Pfowler17, Ereed23, Bamcclure18, Kerrymonique, Ab1g81aL93, and Markerman76: Class, please do not journal on Wikipedia. It is against the policy and could cause the class some difficulty (it happened last semester). If you must keep a journal, do so off of Wikipedia, please. I would ask that you take a look at the 3Cs Log assignment again. It is not a journal assignment. Everything you post should be about improving Wikipedia in some way. Please see WP:NOTWEBHOST and read it carefully.
When you have read this post, please acknowledge below. I am also happy to discuss this further. Thank you. — Grlucas ( talk) 22:52, 21 January 2020 (UTC)
@ JenniferMGA, Lizrileymga, Dcb1986, KatieRob27, OrchardBreeze, Amdoubleu, Benjamin Fincher, Acmunoz14, Qtwinbush45, Pfowler17, Ereed23, Bamcclure18, Kerrymonique, Ab1g81aL93, and Markerman76: I have posted about your midterm grades. — Grlucas ( talk) 17:14, 31 January 2020 (UTC)
@ JenniferMGA, Lizrileymga, Dcb1986, KatieRob27, OrchardBreeze, Amdoubleu, Benjamin Fincher, Acmunoz14, Qtwinbush45, Pfowler17, Ereed23, Bamcclure18, Kerrymonique, Ab1g81aL93, Markerman76, and Soudeaforbes: We are about finished with the class! You all should feel proud of what you've accomplished so far on Wikipedia, and this week (by 2/26) you need to submit what you've done for evaluation. Once you have posted your reflexive statement on your talk page (see the syllabus—it should detail your major contributions to Wikipedia over the last few weeks, including appropriate links—especially to your individual project article), post a link to it below. Please do this last as an indication that you're ready for evaluation. We still have a week, so keep working and asking questions to make your work the best it can be. I truly look forward to seeing your final products. — Grlucas ( talk) 11:36, 20 February 2020 (UTC)
@ JenniferMGA, Lizrileymga, Dcb1986, KatieRob27, OrchardBreeze, Amdoubleu, Benjamin Fincher, Acmunoz14, Qtwinbush45, Pfowler17, Ereed23, Bamcclure18, Kerrymonique, Markerman76, and Soudeaforbes: Thanks, all. As I evaluate, I’m leaving comments here. I'm proceeding in order of submission above. If I missed anything or seem unfair, please post here or shoot me an email. Again, well done, all. You should be proud of your work in the class and your support of the Wikipedia community. — Grlucas ( talk) 15:56, 27 February 2020 (UTC)
I see what you're doing, Dr. Lucas--thanks. I'm working on one of your students' DYK nominations ( Template:Did you know nominations/Madwoman (book)); I suppose for them the whole thing is over now that that portion of your class is over. Anyway, I'll try to get it on the front page anyway, so you can add that to your Wikipedia user page and to your annual evaluation. ;) Drmies ( talk) 14:56, 7 March 2020 (UTC) |
Hi, Dr. Lucas! This is Kaitlyn Kelly in your Senior Seminar Course on Tuesday's @ 9:30. In class on Tuesday, 3/10/2020, you stated that part one of our wikipedia article, Hamlet on the Holodeck was a bit too long. I have made revisions to that section of the article to where it's short, sweet and straight to the point. I was wondering would you mind taking a look at the article so that I can know whether if it's still too long, too short, etc.I do plan on adding maybe a few more sentences to discuss the last bit of the chapter. I just wanted your opinion. Here's the link to our article. Draft: Hamlet on the Holodeck Kaitlyn.Kelly ( talk) 02:28, 14 March 2020 (UTC)
My dissertation follows the growth of graffiti in New York City from child's play to an original art. [1]
Good evening@ Grlucas:, I wanted you to be aware that I had rewritten two main sections under our article from two of my group members. Their contributions lacked sources, citations, and I noticed direct copying of sentences from the book. After thorough editing and revising, I was notified that a random user had undone my edits. Their reason was because I didn't provide a better description as to my edits. (I believed I had). I noticed this occurred after I had also edited the Lead. Well, after a little while, I went back and undone what this random user had done. I left the Lead alone this time because I'm afraid it'll trigger that user to come back and perhaps block me or worse, delete all my work again. The good news is that I know you're able to go into my history and see this crazy exchange. I just wanted to take the initiative and make you aware. I appreciate you and your time. Besides the random users deleting my work, this new Wiki experience was a fun adventure. KRCPhilmon ( talk) 03:42, 6 May 2020 (UTC)
Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. An automated process has detected that when you recently edited Superman Comes to the Supermarket, you added links pointing to the disambiguation pages Henry Wallace and Adlai Stevenson. Such links are usually incorrect, since a disambiguation page is merely a list of unrelated topics with similar titles. (Read the FAQ • Join us at the DPL WikiProject.)
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The article cites "Lennon (2018, pp. 3–37)" but no such source is listed in bibliography. Can you please add? Also, suggest installing a script to highlight such errors in the future. All you need to do is copy and paste importScript('User:Svick/HarvErrors.js'); // Backlink: [[User:Svick/HarvErrors.js]]
to
your common.js page. Thanks,
Renata (
talk)
20:45, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
Roll call! All students in ENGL 3700 should say hello and sign below, so I have a link to your user page. This link will appear automatically in your signature. (See the introduction to talk pages, if you have not already.)
Hello! haley.carter1 ( talk) 12:12, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
Hi friends! ivy.sapp ( talk) 12:15, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
Hey there! — Pittmanraven ( talk) — Preceding undated comment added 17:17, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
Hello! Jennifero2000 ( talk) 17:19, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
Hello! Abi sap ( talk) 17:20, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
Hello everybody! AnnaVorisek ( talk) 20:46, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
Bonjour. — RyanArian ( talk) 9:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
Greetings. sean.robinson ( talk) 16:25, 26 January, 2021 — Preceding unsigned comment added by SeanRobi733 ( talk • contribs) 21:26, 26 January 2021 (UTC)
Hello ! Anawimpy98 ( talk) — Preceding undated comment added 16:22, 28 January 2021 (UTC)