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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 16:05, 24 September 2018 (UTC)
Hi! This was posted to the talk page for The Book of Unknown Americans. Peer reviews are supposed to be posted to the draft talk page ( User talk:Gemaavila/sandbox).
- Wow! I really want to read this book! I like that your lead section is easy to understand and the information that you share there was so good, I already made up my mind to read the book then. Your article has a very clear structure and is concise and neutral, which I know can be challenging! But I think you did a great job. If I would make any suggestions it would be that maybe you could add information about the author Cristina Henriquez, I would be interested to know how she was inspired to write the story. I was also wondering if maybe you would want to add the Best Books of 2014 and 2014 novella of the year to the top, unless Development and Publication History moves down and you could put it there? I like that your sources are able to give some fun opinions and exciting language, that was a good idea! I look forward to seeing the page when you are all finished! And to have a conversation about the book too. Great job! Graiperins ( talk) 05:27, 4 November 2018 (UTC)
I've moved your comment here since I wasn't sure if this was a review of the live article or meant for the draft at User:Gemaavila/sandbox. Shalor (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 18:56, 5 November 2018 (UTC)
Hi! My only notes here would be to add more sourcing to help back up claims and to also maybe flesh out the article a little more here and there. I've added a few to a "further reading" section, but there looks to be quite a few out there - you may have to look more specifically at academic and scholarly sources. Your university's research librarian would be able to help you find more in your academic databases. If you can't go in person (which hey, can happen), you can always chat with them here online. Offhand though, I don't see any major issues and most of this is just going to be tweaking that you can do just as easily do once the article has been moved live as you could in your userspace. Shalor (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 20:19, 6 November 2018 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: The Tale of Joan of Arc (December 25)
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MfD nomination of Draft:The Tale of Joan of Arc
Draft:The Tale of Joan of Arc, a page which you created or substantially contributed to, has been nominated for
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12:31, 25 December 2018 (UTC)
| This user is a student editor in San_Francisco_State_University/English_717_Projects_in_Teaching_Literature_(Fall_2018) . |
Hello, Graiperins, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 16:05, 24 September 2018 (UTC)
Hi! This was posted to the talk page for The Book of Unknown Americans. Peer reviews are supposed to be posted to the draft talk page ( User talk:Gemaavila/sandbox).
- Wow! I really want to read this book! I like that your lead section is easy to understand and the information that you share there was so good, I already made up my mind to read the book then. Your article has a very clear structure and is concise and neutral, which I know can be challenging! But I think you did a great job. If I would make any suggestions it would be that maybe you could add information about the author Cristina Henriquez, I would be interested to know how she was inspired to write the story. I was also wondering if maybe you would want to add the Best Books of 2014 and 2014 novella of the year to the top, unless Development and Publication History moves down and you could put it there? I like that your sources are able to give some fun opinions and exciting language, that was a good idea! I look forward to seeing the page when you are all finished! And to have a conversation about the book too. Great job! Graiperins ( talk) 05:27, 4 November 2018 (UTC)
I've moved your comment here since I wasn't sure if this was a review of the live article or meant for the draft at User:Gemaavila/sandbox. Shalor (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 18:56, 5 November 2018 (UTC)
Hi! My only notes here would be to add more sourcing to help back up claims and to also maybe flesh out the article a little more here and there. I've added a few to a "further reading" section, but there looks to be quite a few out there - you may have to look more specifically at academic and scholarly sources. Your university's research librarian would be able to help you find more in your academic databases. If you can't go in person (which hey, can happen), you can always chat with them here online. Offhand though, I don't see any major issues and most of this is just going to be tweaking that you can do just as easily do once the article has been moved live as you could in your userspace. Shalor (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 20:19, 6 November 2018 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: The Tale of Joan of Arc (December 25)
- If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:The Tale of Joan of Arc and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
- If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:The Tale of Joan of Arc, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{ db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
- If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
- You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.
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Hello, Graiperins!
Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the
Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the
Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there!
CoolSkittle (
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12:29, 25 December 2018 (UTC)
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MfD nomination of Draft:The Tale of Joan of Arc
Draft:The Tale of Joan of Arc, a page which you created or substantially contributed to, has been nominated for
deletion. Your opinions on the matter are welcome; you may participate in the discussion by adding your comments at
Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Draft:The Tale of Joan of Arc and please be sure to
sign your comments with four tildes (~~~~). You are free to edit the content of
Draft:The Tale of Joan of Arc during the discussion but should not remove the miscellany for deletion template from the top of the page; such a removal will not end the deletion discussion. Thank you.
CoolSkittle (
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12:31, 25 December 2018 (UTC)