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Here is the link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Boston_Terrier&diff=prev&oldid=982847591 This time I chose Boston terrier as my topic since I have one at home. I spent too much time finding a useful link for the article, but end up reuse the reference the article has since it missed some information. Amandaerfeng ( talk) 18:59, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
I chose Determinism as my article this week. I provide an extra reference to this article and point out Determinism is about interaction which affect our cognitive processes in our life. Here is the difference between the previous version and the current one.
During this week assignment, I learned how to provide more information without my own bias. CaptainJoseph ( talk) 19:04, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
@ FULBERT: I have done that, thank you professor! CaptainJoseph ( talk) 19:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
@ FULBERT: Sorry for my misunderstanding. CaptainJoseph ( talk) 19:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
@ FULBERT: Sure professor. It basically means that Determinism is about the cause and the result of what we have done in our life. Cause and result are always bounded together in our cognitive processes, so if we have sufficient information about a object we might predict every move of that object including human being. That is just A point of view of Determinism. CaptainJoseph ( talk) 19:31, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
@ FULBERT: Allright! I have done that in the article! Here is the link! CaptainJoseph ( talk) 20:58, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
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In this section, I completed an evaluation of Augmented Reality article, here: Augmented Reality. I noted that the Possible Applications section could be expanded and that the Privacy Concerns citation could use more citations. I left some feedback on the article's Talk page. Diff link is here: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Talk:Augmented_reality&curid=231173&diff=982977172&oldid=982971858. In this section, I learned how to insert links and leave feedback. I am still figuring out the headers on Talk pages to leave feedback.
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For this section, I added a citation and copyedited a sentence for word choice in Virtual reality therapy. The link to the diff is https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Virtual_reality_therapy&type=revision&diff=982988347&oldid=981561301
I learned how adding a citation in the source code automatically adds the source in the references below on an article. I learned how to make small copyedits for work choice and typos.
Nectaros ( talk) 16:02, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Virtual_reality_therapy&type=revision&diff=982988347&oldid=981561301 Nectaros ( talk) 19:50, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
I added a citation to Commercial Augmented Reality in the summary for dressing room applications. Diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Commercial_augmented_reality&type=revision&diff=983003216&oldid=921537030. I learned about manual insertion of citations, since the source would not auto-populate. Nectaros ( talk) 17:40, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
Nectaros ( talk) 19:52, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
I added a citation to the article called "Bee hummingbird" to better understand which area do bee hummingbird likes to stay. Here is the difference link: https://en.wikipedia.org/title=Bee_hummingbird&type=revision&diff=982853910&oldid=982809972 After week5, I had a deeper understanding of how to cite a source and how to explain a topic in details in order to make articles from Wiki more useful. Muzizimu ( talk) 19:38, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
This week I added a citation to an article that talks about Taoism. The citation itself can give the reader a better first glance of the history and concepts behind Taoism before any deep dive into the studies themselves, so readers will note the difference compared with Confucianism from a very basic standpoint. Here is the difference link: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Taoism&type=revision&diff=983763890&oldid=983676700 Here is the article: /info/en/?search=Taoism 燕京赵大知识分子 ( talk) 03:21, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
The article I chose this week is "Liopleurodon", this is my favorite see-creature belong to prehistoric time. I notice that the couple definitions are not so clear if the readers not familiar with those creatures. So I just make a citation to help easy to understand. Here is the difference-link: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Liopleurodon&type=revision&diff=982919961&oldid=982859273 -- ShawnBoom ( talk) 05:25, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
I have a Miniature Schnauzer, so I search this article ( /info/en/?search=Miniature_Schnauzer) and I have never heard about "UK Kennel Club". Then I added a citation to this article ( /info/en/?search=The_Kennel_Club) under the health part. Hope this citation help more people have a good understanding. This link shows the difference between revisions: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Miniature_Schnauzer&type=revision&diff=982907866&oldid=982712683. Since not all people know and understand your article's reference, a citation is very important for the reviewer to understand the article and your idea. DetongChe ( talk) 03:14, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
1. This week I assign myself an article named Social identity theory. The summary of this article is: Tajfel et al. conducted studies to minimal criteria to develop ingroup bias and discrimination. They found that social categorization per se is a sufficient condition to develop intergroup bias, without pre-existing hostility or resourece for competition between groups. I add a description to the previous version, which make the definition more accurate. Besides, the previous version does not have reference, so I insert a reference to make it more convincing and persuasive.
2. The link to the difference is https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/983952173
3. From Wikipedia’s article, I learn lots of useful contents. By editing the article and add citation to it, I’m glad I can make the information on Wikipedia more useful and related, and provide more details to the readers. Ywrhea ( talk) 07:52, 17 October 2020 (UTC) Ywrhea ( talk) 07:51, 17 October 2020 (UTC)
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I selected and assigned myself to another article called "Eason Chan", who is my favorite singer in China. He has been one of China's best-selling artists since 2000 and has won many prestigious awards. Here is the link of the article: /info/en/?search=Eason_Chan. Here is the difference between revisions: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Eason_Chan&diff=984038552&oldid=977619244. In this week, I am more proficient in how to add citations in an article, that is so helpful for me. -- Js11323 ( talk) 20:03, 17 October 2020 (UTC)
1. Here is the article for this week, /info/en/?search=Hunger_marketing#Emotional_decision_making
2. Here is the change I made, https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Hunger_marketing&diff=984083705&oldid=928129560
3. This week, I edited an article called "Hunger Marketing". It is a relatively new topic in marketing, and hence it needs more information. I edited part of "emotional decision making" by pointing out that it is essentially equivalent to intuitive decision making. I learned the importance of keep correcting Wiki articles because a non-popular article like this one I edited definitely needs more improvement. -- ASCXX ( talk) 02:31, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
I added a sentence to the article called "Geography of Bolivia" under the climate section to point out that temperature and surface elevation is closely related. The link to diff is : https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Geography_of_Bolivia&type=revision&diff=984088184&oldid=976429094 I learned that each sentence or word you put on wikipedia should be readable and related to the article. Muzizimu ( talk) 02:55, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
I added more information to the article "Silvano Arieti" about his personal contribution in psychology. the diff link is: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Silvano_Arieti&diff=984203823&oldid=958638470. I think the editing on wiki also is a good opportunity for us to encounter new knowledge. Lipute17 ( talk) 20:21, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
This week, I've assigned myself an article about Apple Inc, and adding one paragraph in the section of Energy and resources. Here is the link of the difference https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Apple_Inc.&type=revision&diff=983872590&oldid=983766237 I added a paragraph on about how the Apple's next 10-years-plan of being com·plete·lycarbon neutral in 2030, and then I provided what series of innovative actions that Apple is taking to lower emissions. Another good new for this time assignment is that the first time somebody else thanked to my edit and fix couple words in my edit. I feel great this time. Also what I learned from this week is that the wikipedia articles should be time sensitive, and adding updates. It is not a one-time project.-- 八路军被服厂李厂长 ( talk) 23:11, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
I worked on an article titled business administration that described the overall management and administration of an organization. I added some information on the article regarding the Henri Fayol's five functions of management and cited the references. Here is the link to the original article /info/en/?search=Business_administration?veaction=edit and here is the edit version /info/en/?search=Business_administration Mavin2516 ( talk) 21:21, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
The article I chose this week is "Online shopping". The weather in NY becomes much colder today that reminds me it's might be the time to buy a winter sweater or jacket. So I just start online shopping before I searched for this article. I want to know more myself as a customer. And what I cited this time is just providing a couple more points to help the author have a better statement. The difference link is https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Online_shopping&type=revision&diff=983877068&oldid=978355176 -- ShawnBoom ( talk) 19:57, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
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Hi! During this week I edited the article League of Legends, for citation this week, I find that the article itself didn't mention that League of Legends's mobile game. So for this gap between the knowledge of this article I cite that the mobile game of LoL is launching its open beta test on October 27, 2020 to fill this gap. Here is difference link for that. In this week's exercise, I learned how to apply my exist knowledge to an article and find relevant references. Thank you very much CaptainJoseph ( talk) 22:44, 17 October 2020 (UTC)
The article I chose this week is "COVID-19 pandemic in New York City". I went to the supermarket and buy something I can't purchase from the online store today and there are so many crowds outside on the street and in the market, I mean everywhere, that makes me feel the pandemic is already gone. I also mention that there are too many people who take the street as home, I mean may way more people than before. So I want to know more about the portion of how local government reactions to people who have difficulty living inside of rooms. After reading through a couple of articles, I realized the government does care about everyone from a big picture perspective. And I also cited the couple points of what's government done for each people in the article I chose this week. Here is the difference link: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=COVID-19_pandemic_in_New_York_City&type=revision&diff=984260976&oldid=983911352 -- ShawnBoom ( talk) 15:08, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
I choose an artist who comes from Japan, I have researched him when I take graphic design classes. Here's the article link: /info/en/?search=Takashi_Murakami, and I added the citation link is: /info/en/?search=Animation. Since the "Animation Industry" did not have a good explanation in the article, so I added a sentence to the article. This is the link for difference between revisions: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Takashi_Murakami&type=revision&diff=982919994&oldid=981538443. After week 5, I clearly know a good citation is very significant for the article, also will be better for the reviewer to read the article with the right meaning. DetongChe ( talk) 05:39, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
@ FULBERT:I added the citation link switch to: https://www.moca.org/. This citation link will the part of his career experience and exhibition. Here's the link for difference between revisions: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Takashi_Murakami&type=revision&diff=983854547&oldid=983194121. DetongChe ( talk) 17:08, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
Link to the comparison: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=GeForce_30_series&type=revision&diff=984208782&oldid=983567181 In this article, it describes the launch of a new tech product that is extremely popular among the consumers. People are trying their best to get as much information about inventory status as possible. I updated some information regarding the third party sales partners so that everyone knows where to buy it. Although the citation comes from a forum, it's an official announcement made by an NVIDIA sales department representative on the official website forum and the wording is trustworthy. Martinmadison ( talk) 21:00, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
This time, the article that I chose is Herberger Institute for Design and the Arts, add one citation on the art school, here is the link of the difference https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Herberger_Institute_for_Design_and_the_Arts&diff=prev&oldid=982860152 Through this part of work, I read the link of the article that professor provide on the Guide(s) for Working on Articles in Your Topic Area - Art history. Last time, I did some change on Arizona state university, this time I did change on the Herberger institute, it is one of the institute of ASU, it get more deeper and more specific on the article. I read it carefully and checked all the grammar and spelling, it is helpful to me and let me know how the wikipedia's article important to reader. Shangyingsun ( talk) 20:34, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
Hi professor, I just assigned myself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard. Shangyingsun ( talk) 06:14, 12 October 2020 (UTC)
Hi professor, I've already edited the summary of my change and published it. But it not showing in my contribution and diff. I added a sentence to explained the change "add link of ASU art school, it will help reader to get more information about ASU art school." Shangyingsun ( talk) 12:11, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
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For this assignment, I assigned myself the article introducing Roger Mason Jr who was a former NBA player and here is the link to the article: /info/en/?search=Roger_Mason_Jr. I added a citation which contains the official statistics of Mason's NBA career to better demonstarte his career development when he was playing for San Antonio Spurs. The following is the link to diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Roger_Mason_Jr.&diff=984528685&oldid=984500489. In this process, I have realized that some articles about public figures who are not that famous is highly likely to make claims without evidence to support, so it is necessary to improve them. Forza spurs ( talk) 15:46, 20 October 2020 (UTC)
1. The article I cite talks about Zhuangzi's void and quietness theory and its effects. 2. The link to the difference is: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Zhuang_Zhou&type=revision&diff=984768744&oldid=973796174 3, What I learned during the process is that how does Zhuangzi afffects the world and holds a new view towards the world.
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Here is the link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Boston_Terrier&diff=prev&oldid=982847591 This time I chose Boston terrier as my topic since I have one at home. I spent too much time finding a useful link for the article, but end up reuse the reference the article has since it missed some information. Amandaerfeng ( talk) 18:59, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
I chose Determinism as my article this week. I provide an extra reference to this article and point out Determinism is about interaction which affect our cognitive processes in our life. Here is the difference between the previous version and the current one.
During this week assignment, I learned how to provide more information without my own bias. CaptainJoseph ( talk) 19:04, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
@ FULBERT: I have done that, thank you professor! CaptainJoseph ( talk) 19:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
@ FULBERT: Sorry for my misunderstanding. CaptainJoseph ( talk) 19:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
@ FULBERT: Sure professor. It basically means that Determinism is about the cause and the result of what we have done in our life. Cause and result are always bounded together in our cognitive processes, so if we have sufficient information about a object we might predict every move of that object including human being. That is just A point of view of Determinism. CaptainJoseph ( talk) 19:31, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
@ FULBERT: Allright! I have done that in the article! Here is the link! CaptainJoseph ( talk) 20:58, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
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In this section, I completed an evaluation of Augmented Reality article, here: Augmented Reality. I noted that the Possible Applications section could be expanded and that the Privacy Concerns citation could use more citations. I left some feedback on the article's Talk page. Diff link is here: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Talk:Augmented_reality&curid=231173&diff=982977172&oldid=982971858. In this section, I learned how to insert links and leave feedback. I am still figuring out the headers on Talk pages to leave feedback.
Nectaros ( talk) 19:46, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
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For this section, I added a citation and copyedited a sentence for word choice in Virtual reality therapy. The link to the diff is https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Virtual_reality_therapy&type=revision&diff=982988347&oldid=981561301
I learned how adding a citation in the source code automatically adds the source in the references below on an article. I learned how to make small copyedits for work choice and typos.
Nectaros ( talk) 16:02, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Virtual_reality_therapy&type=revision&diff=982988347&oldid=981561301 Nectaros ( talk) 19:50, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
I added a citation to Commercial Augmented Reality in the summary for dressing room applications. Diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Commercial_augmented_reality&type=revision&diff=983003216&oldid=921537030. I learned about manual insertion of citations, since the source would not auto-populate. Nectaros ( talk) 17:40, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
Nectaros ( talk) 19:52, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
I added a citation to the article called "Bee hummingbird" to better understand which area do bee hummingbird likes to stay. Here is the difference link: https://en.wikipedia.org/title=Bee_hummingbird&type=revision&diff=982853910&oldid=982809972 After week5, I had a deeper understanding of how to cite a source and how to explain a topic in details in order to make articles from Wiki more useful. Muzizimu ( talk) 19:38, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
This week I added a citation to an article that talks about Taoism. The citation itself can give the reader a better first glance of the history and concepts behind Taoism before any deep dive into the studies themselves, so readers will note the difference compared with Confucianism from a very basic standpoint. Here is the difference link: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Taoism&type=revision&diff=983763890&oldid=983676700 Here is the article: /info/en/?search=Taoism 燕京赵大知识分子 ( talk) 03:21, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
The article I chose this week is "Liopleurodon", this is my favorite see-creature belong to prehistoric time. I notice that the couple definitions are not so clear if the readers not familiar with those creatures. So I just make a citation to help easy to understand. Here is the difference-link: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Liopleurodon&type=revision&diff=982919961&oldid=982859273 -- ShawnBoom ( talk) 05:25, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
I have a Miniature Schnauzer, so I search this article ( /info/en/?search=Miniature_Schnauzer) and I have never heard about "UK Kennel Club". Then I added a citation to this article ( /info/en/?search=The_Kennel_Club) under the health part. Hope this citation help more people have a good understanding. This link shows the difference between revisions: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Miniature_Schnauzer&type=revision&diff=982907866&oldid=982712683. Since not all people know and understand your article's reference, a citation is very important for the reviewer to understand the article and your idea. DetongChe ( talk) 03:14, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
1. This week I assign myself an article named Social identity theory. The summary of this article is: Tajfel et al. conducted studies to minimal criteria to develop ingroup bias and discrimination. They found that social categorization per se is a sufficient condition to develop intergroup bias, without pre-existing hostility or resourece for competition between groups. I add a description to the previous version, which make the definition more accurate. Besides, the previous version does not have reference, so I insert a reference to make it more convincing and persuasive.
2. The link to the difference is https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/983952173
3. From Wikipedia’s article, I learn lots of useful contents. By editing the article and add citation to it, I’m glad I can make the information on Wikipedia more useful and related, and provide more details to the readers. Ywrhea ( talk) 07:52, 17 October 2020 (UTC) Ywrhea ( talk) 07:51, 17 October 2020 (UTC)
Hello, FULBERT.
The following is WikiProject Today's articles for improvement's weekly selection: Please be bold and help to improve this article! Previous selections: Organisms at high altitude • Trout Mask Replica Get involved with the TAFI project. You can: Nominate an article • Review nominations Posted by: MusikBot talk 00:05, 19 October 2020 (UTC) using MediaWiki message delivery ( talk) on behalf of WikiProject TAFI • |
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I selected and assigned myself to another article called "Eason Chan", who is my favorite singer in China. He has been one of China's best-selling artists since 2000 and has won many prestigious awards. Here is the link of the article: /info/en/?search=Eason_Chan. Here is the difference between revisions: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Eason_Chan&diff=984038552&oldid=977619244. In this week, I am more proficient in how to add citations in an article, that is so helpful for me. -- Js11323 ( talk) 20:03, 17 October 2020 (UTC)
1. Here is the article for this week, /info/en/?search=Hunger_marketing#Emotional_decision_making
2. Here is the change I made, https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Hunger_marketing&diff=984083705&oldid=928129560
3. This week, I edited an article called "Hunger Marketing". It is a relatively new topic in marketing, and hence it needs more information. I edited part of "emotional decision making" by pointing out that it is essentially equivalent to intuitive decision making. I learned the importance of keep correcting Wiki articles because a non-popular article like this one I edited definitely needs more improvement. -- ASCXX ( talk) 02:31, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
I added a sentence to the article called "Geography of Bolivia" under the climate section to point out that temperature and surface elevation is closely related. The link to diff is : https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Geography_of_Bolivia&type=revision&diff=984088184&oldid=976429094 I learned that each sentence or word you put on wikipedia should be readable and related to the article. Muzizimu ( talk) 02:55, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
I added more information to the article "Silvano Arieti" about his personal contribution in psychology. the diff link is: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Silvano_Arieti&diff=984203823&oldid=958638470. I think the editing on wiki also is a good opportunity for us to encounter new knowledge. Lipute17 ( talk) 20:21, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
This week, I've assigned myself an article about Apple Inc, and adding one paragraph in the section of Energy and resources. Here is the link of the difference https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Apple_Inc.&type=revision&diff=983872590&oldid=983766237 I added a paragraph on about how the Apple's next 10-years-plan of being com·plete·lycarbon neutral in 2030, and then I provided what series of innovative actions that Apple is taking to lower emissions. Another good new for this time assignment is that the first time somebody else thanked to my edit and fix couple words in my edit. I feel great this time. Also what I learned from this week is that the wikipedia articles should be time sensitive, and adding updates. It is not a one-time project.-- 八路军被服厂李厂长 ( talk) 23:11, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
I worked on an article titled business administration that described the overall management and administration of an organization. I added some information on the article regarding the Henri Fayol's five functions of management and cited the references. Here is the link to the original article /info/en/?search=Business_administration?veaction=edit and here is the edit version /info/en/?search=Business_administration Mavin2516 ( talk) 21:21, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
The article I chose this week is "Online shopping". The weather in NY becomes much colder today that reminds me it's might be the time to buy a winter sweater or jacket. So I just start online shopping before I searched for this article. I want to know more myself as a customer. And what I cited this time is just providing a couple more points to help the author have a better statement. The difference link is https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Online_shopping&type=revision&diff=983877068&oldid=978355176 -- ShawnBoom ( talk) 19:57, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
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Hi! During this week I edited the article League of Legends, for citation this week, I find that the article itself didn't mention that League of Legends's mobile game. So for this gap between the knowledge of this article I cite that the mobile game of LoL is launching its open beta test on October 27, 2020 to fill this gap. Here is difference link for that. In this week's exercise, I learned how to apply my exist knowledge to an article and find relevant references. Thank you very much CaptainJoseph ( talk) 22:44, 17 October 2020 (UTC)
The article I chose this week is "COVID-19 pandemic in New York City". I went to the supermarket and buy something I can't purchase from the online store today and there are so many crowds outside on the street and in the market, I mean everywhere, that makes me feel the pandemic is already gone. I also mention that there are too many people who take the street as home, I mean may way more people than before. So I want to know more about the portion of how local government reactions to people who have difficulty living inside of rooms. After reading through a couple of articles, I realized the government does care about everyone from a big picture perspective. And I also cited the couple points of what's government done for each people in the article I chose this week. Here is the difference link: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=COVID-19_pandemic_in_New_York_City&type=revision&diff=984260976&oldid=983911352 -- ShawnBoom ( talk) 15:08, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
I choose an artist who comes from Japan, I have researched him when I take graphic design classes. Here's the article link: /info/en/?search=Takashi_Murakami, and I added the citation link is: /info/en/?search=Animation. Since the "Animation Industry" did not have a good explanation in the article, so I added a sentence to the article. This is the link for difference between revisions: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Takashi_Murakami&type=revision&diff=982919994&oldid=981538443. After week 5, I clearly know a good citation is very significant for the article, also will be better for the reviewer to read the article with the right meaning. DetongChe ( talk) 05:39, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
@ FULBERT:I added the citation link switch to: https://www.moca.org/. This citation link will the part of his career experience and exhibition. Here's the link for difference between revisions: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Takashi_Murakami&type=revision&diff=983854547&oldid=983194121. DetongChe ( talk) 17:08, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
Link to the comparison: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=GeForce_30_series&type=revision&diff=984208782&oldid=983567181 In this article, it describes the launch of a new tech product that is extremely popular among the consumers. People are trying their best to get as much information about inventory status as possible. I updated some information regarding the third party sales partners so that everyone knows where to buy it. Although the citation comes from a forum, it's an official announcement made by an NVIDIA sales department representative on the official website forum and the wording is trustworthy. Martinmadison ( talk) 21:00, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
This time, the article that I chose is Herberger Institute for Design and the Arts, add one citation on the art school, here is the link of the difference https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Herberger_Institute_for_Design_and_the_Arts&diff=prev&oldid=982860152 Through this part of work, I read the link of the article that professor provide on the Guide(s) for Working on Articles in Your Topic Area - Art history. Last time, I did some change on Arizona state university, this time I did change on the Herberger institute, it is one of the institute of ASU, it get more deeper and more specific on the article. I read it carefully and checked all the grammar and spelling, it is helpful to me and let me know how the wikipedia's article important to reader. Shangyingsun ( talk) 20:34, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
Hi professor, I just assigned myself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard. Shangyingsun ( talk) 06:14, 12 October 2020 (UTC)
Hi professor, I've already edited the summary of my change and published it. But it not showing in my contribution and diff. I added a sentence to explained the change "add link of ASU art school, it will help reader to get more information about ASU art school." Shangyingsun ( talk) 12:11, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
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For this assignment, I assigned myself the article introducing Roger Mason Jr who was a former NBA player and here is the link to the article: /info/en/?search=Roger_Mason_Jr. I added a citation which contains the official statistics of Mason's NBA career to better demonstarte his career development when he was playing for San Antonio Spurs. The following is the link to diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Roger_Mason_Jr.&diff=984528685&oldid=984500489. In this process, I have realized that some articles about public figures who are not that famous is highly likely to make claims without evidence to support, so it is necessary to improve them. Forza spurs ( talk) 15:46, 20 October 2020 (UTC)
1. The article I cite talks about Zhuangzi's void and quietness theory and its effects. 2. The link to the difference is: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Zhuang_Zhou&type=revision&diff=984768744&oldid=973796174 3, What I learned during the process is that how does Zhuangzi afffects the world and holds a new view towards the world.
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