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Felipe C.S ( talk ) 22:20, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
Olá, meu amigo. Vejo que é brasileiro, então acredito que possa escrever em português aqui, se não se importar! Gostaria de fazer alguns comentários sobre o que escreveu na página de discussão do artigo sobre o Brasil, se não se importar.
Wouldn't it be important to also cite the very important European mão-de-obra in the Western São Paulo? (damn, forgot the english word for it :~ thankfully you're brazilian)
This part in my opinion is important, it shows how long it actually did take for the processos to happen here, showing, also, how deeply rooted it was in the society. Maybe American countris, instead of Western countries, would be better.
This part isn't so wrong, I'd say. With some extra information it is very important to, once again, show how slavery was an important part of the society. Maybe state that Pedro II did want to abolish, but thought it should be done gradually, so that there weren't any anthagonisms with slave owners.
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Felipe C.S ( talk ) 22:20, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
Olá, meu amigo. Vejo que é brasileiro, então acredito que possa escrever em português aqui, se não se importar! Gostaria de fazer alguns comentários sobre o que escreveu na página de discussão do artigo sobre o Brasil, se não se importar.
Wouldn't it be important to also cite the very important European mão-de-obra in the Western São Paulo? (damn, forgot the english word for it :~ thankfully you're brazilian)
This part in my opinion is important, it shows how long it actually did take for the processos to happen here, showing, also, how deeply rooted it was in the society. Maybe American countris, instead of Western countries, would be better.
This part isn't so wrong, I'd say. With some extra information it is very important to, once again, show how slavery was an important part of the society. Maybe state that Pedro II did want to abolish, but thought it should be done gradually, so that there weren't any anthagonisms with slave owners.