Hello Enhazaam, welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Liance, and I've been editing here for a while. I wanted to thank you for submitting Draft:Netanel Korin to WikiProject Articles for Creation and helping to grow the encyclopedia! We appreciate your contributions and hope you stick around. I can see you've already started writing draft articles, so here are a few more resources that might be helpful:
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Chetsford ( talk) 02:47, 17 June 2024 (UTC)Hello, Enhazaam!
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Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.
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SL93 ( talk) 00:38, 19 June 2024 (UTC)He's clearly notable, but what you wrote was a poorly sourced hagiography, rather than a a neutral encyclopaedia article. When you write about a person
Much of your text consists of opinions rather than verifiable facts, and doesn't alway confirm the claimed facts. For example, your paragraph David Goodblatt died on September 25, 2019, after being struck by a vehicle during his morning walk. He is survived by his wife Sasona, their children Keren, Michael, and Grace, and granddaughter Logan. Goodblatt was known for his nurturing nature, often sharing moments of warmth and encouragement with his students and colleagues. He left a lasting legacy in both his academic field and his community is sourced to comments made by friends and family on a legacy site. I'd be interested to know why you consider that a reputable, independent third-party source. Also, it doesn't confirm any of the claimed facts in the first sentence, and his character is irrelevant to his notablity. Saying how wonderful he was and attributing to friend and family comments on an obituary page is just flim-flam.
Similarly, your claim His scholarship significantly advanced the understanding of Jewish self-governance and nationalism in antiquity has three sources, none of which is an independent third-party sources, and none of which say what you claim, which would only be an opinion anyway. Everything is renowned, excelled, prestigious and so on.
If you think you can write this with proper sources and verified facts, and without the "He was wonderful" stuff, let me know and I'll sandbox it for you. Incidentally, books don't need references but should have an isbn Jimfbleak - talk to me? 08:27, 25 June 2024 (UTC) a similar tone applies throughout, Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources.
Hello Enhazaam, welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Liance, and I've been editing here for a while. I wanted to thank you for submitting Draft:Netanel Korin to WikiProject Articles for Creation and helping to grow the encyclopedia! We appreciate your contributions and hope you stick around. I can see you've already started writing draft articles, so here are a few more resources that might be helpful:
I highly recommend visiting The Teahouse if you are unsure about anything Wiki related. It's a place where experienced editors answer questions and assist newcomers in the editing process. In addition, please do not hesitate to reach out on my talk page if you have any specific questions. Once again, welcome! I hope you enjoy your time here. ~ Liance talk 21:30, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
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Chetsford ( talk) 02:47, 17 June 2024 (UTC)Hello, Enhazaam!
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DoubleGrazing (
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13:16, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
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Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.
The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. This is a great rating for a new article, and places it among the top 20% of accepted submissions — kudos to you! You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.
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If you would like to help us improve this process, please consider
.Thanks again, and happy editing!
SL93 ( talk) 00:38, 19 June 2024 (UTC)He's clearly notable, but what you wrote was a poorly sourced hagiography, rather than a a neutral encyclopaedia article. When you write about a person
Much of your text consists of opinions rather than verifiable facts, and doesn't alway confirm the claimed facts. For example, your paragraph David Goodblatt died on September 25, 2019, after being struck by a vehicle during his morning walk. He is survived by his wife Sasona, their children Keren, Michael, and Grace, and granddaughter Logan. Goodblatt was known for his nurturing nature, often sharing moments of warmth and encouragement with his students and colleagues. He left a lasting legacy in both his academic field and his community is sourced to comments made by friends and family on a legacy site. I'd be interested to know why you consider that a reputable, independent third-party source. Also, it doesn't confirm any of the claimed facts in the first sentence, and his character is irrelevant to his notablity. Saying how wonderful he was and attributing to friend and family comments on an obituary page is just flim-flam.
Similarly, your claim His scholarship significantly advanced the understanding of Jewish self-governance and nationalism in antiquity has three sources, none of which is an independent third-party sources, and none of which say what you claim, which would only be an opinion anyway. Everything is renowned, excelled, prestigious and so on.
If you think you can write this with proper sources and verified facts, and without the "He was wonderful" stuff, let me know and I'll sandbox it for you. Incidentally, books don't need references but should have an isbn Jimfbleak - talk to me? 08:27, 25 June 2024 (UTC) a similar tone applies throughout, Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources.