Hi Ella, sooo, I took a look at it. Well.... I agree that TCO is notable, but I believe you make your live unneccessarily difficult in the way you write your article. If you want we can try to write it together, but you need to give 3-4 days as this week is stuffed for me.
In the meantime you could already: - find better references in notable and reliable newspapers (keep in mind that you can start with articles (notable Scandinavian newspapers are as good as any other national newspaper) and insert them into your article. - The article about Per Erik Boivie and your article should be cleaner than they are now, it's right now more an advertorial than a wikipedia article and people don't like that (me neither) - A good step would be to start with coverage about your company (history of the company) and work your way down to the certification itself - the introduction of your article is very specific (too specific) for a lexicon article, move "The certification is a third-party certification, independent of the industry and buyers. It meets the requirements of ISO 14024 Ecolabel type 1.[1] Conformity with TCO Certified's standard is verified by an independent organization (third party) following ISO 17011 Accreditation, ISO 17021 Management system certification, ISO 17025 Testing and Calibration Laboratories and ISO / IEC Guide 65 Product Certification.[2]" somewhere else than the introduction.
Coming days I take a look.
Best,
Fthobe ( talk) 10:55, 15 June 2020 (UTC)Fabian p.s. when replying to me don't forget to use the reply template, otherwise I won't see it.
Fthobe ( talk) 15:28, 15 June 2020 (UTC)
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Hi Ellasoderberg! The thread you created at the
Wikipedia:Teahouse,
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Hi Ella, sooo, I took a look at it. Well.... I agree that TCO is notable, but I believe you make your live unneccessarily difficult in the way you write your article. If you want we can try to write it together, but you need to give 3-4 days as this week is stuffed for me.
In the meantime you could already: - find better references in notable and reliable newspapers (keep in mind that you can start with articles (notable Scandinavian newspapers are as good as any other national newspaper) and insert them into your article. - The article about Per Erik Boivie and your article should be cleaner than they are now, it's right now more an advertorial than a wikipedia article and people don't like that (me neither) - A good step would be to start with coverage about your company (history of the company) and work your way down to the certification itself - the introduction of your article is very specific (too specific) for a lexicon article, move "The certification is a third-party certification, independent of the industry and buyers. It meets the requirements of ISO 14024 Ecolabel type 1.[1] Conformity with TCO Certified's standard is verified by an independent organization (third party) following ISO 17011 Accreditation, ISO 17021 Management system certification, ISO 17025 Testing and Calibration Laboratories and ISO / IEC Guide 65 Product Certification.[2]" somewhere else than the introduction.
Coming days I take a look.
Best,
Fthobe ( talk) 10:55, 15 June 2020 (UTC)Fabian p.s. when replying to me don't forget to use the reply template, otherwise I won't see it.
Fthobe ( talk) 15:28, 15 June 2020 (UTC)
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Hi Ellasoderberg! The thread you created at the
Wikipedia:Teahouse,
|