So far the edits you have made look good. You have a lot of good ideas so just continue to work on them and practice in the sandbox before posting. Also, you have a lot of good neutral sources that will be very helpful when drafting the rest of your edits. Keep up the good work you have started so far in this unit. Pitcher15 ( talk) 15:19, 25 April 2018 (UTC)
Lots of good ideas, I like the humor in your notes about Jimmy Wales and his 3 wifes. But In reading this It would be nice to know more specifically what article youre editing, then what in particular you plan to edit. Right now it looks like just notes which is good, and more than I have, but if youre looking to improve that might be a good place to start. ZaGreenScene ( talk) 15:48, 25 April 2018 (UTC)
So far the edits you have made look good. You have a lot of good ideas so just continue to work on them and practice in the sandbox before posting. Also, you have a lot of good neutral sources that will be very helpful when drafting the rest of your edits. Keep up the good work you have started so far in this unit. Pitcher15 ( talk) 15:19, 25 April 2018 (UTC)
Lots of good ideas, I like the humor in your notes about Jimmy Wales and his 3 wifes. But In reading this It would be nice to know more specifically what article youre editing, then what in particular you plan to edit. Right now it looks like just notes which is good, and more than I have, but if youre looking to improve that might be a good place to start. ZaGreenScene ( talk) 15:48, 25 April 2018 (UTC)