- Absolutely no quotes should be used. Paraphrase or summarize.
- History of marine engineering section is overly focused on engines rather than the engineering profession. Needs to be tied to growth of profession.
- Inline citations missing
- Break long paragraphs into smaller ones for easier reading online.
- Absolutely no quotes should be used. Paraphrase or summarize.
- History of marine engineering section is overly focused on engines rather than the engineering profession. Needs to be tied to growth of profession.
- Inline citations missing
- Break long paragraphs into smaller ones for easier reading online.