Your 9 Jan 09 edit ( this diff) claims the Xerox Star was "aimed primarily at the typesetting industry" rather than "aimed at large corporations". I have changed your edit to read "oriented towards large corporations and their trading partners". - Pointillist ( talk) 22:21, 9 January 2009 (UTC)
Your 9 Jan 09 edit ( this diff) claims the Xerox Star was "aimed primarily at the typesetting industry" rather than "aimed at large corporations". I have changed your edit to read "oriented towards large corporations and their trading partners". - Pointillist ( talk) 22:21, 9 January 2009 (UTC)