Obsoleted by NYRM2017, where sanity finally prevailed, and User:Andrewa/NYRM2018. Kept for historical reasons. |
If this draft is accepted, then we copy and paste (almost, I recommend that we re-expand the template using subst:requested move all over again just to prevent any unforeseen glitches) to talk:New York, and as many as are willing (and who agree 100% with the rationale) sign to support as proposers. Existing signatures would be removed and replaced by fresh ones.
JFG, does this help? Does it look at all like what you have in mind?
I'm quite prepared to propose it, but I'd like to hear from you first, in fairness to you and also to get the best possible result. Andrewa ( talk) 01:56, 29 June 2017 (UTC)
This page was only intended as a braindump to help me to comment on the proposal that JFG is preparing when it emerges... part of my homework while waiting.
But this section turned out exceptionally well IMO.
I don't think it needs expansion, and I don't think we can leave anything there out. There is much more that could be said and will be said I'm sure during the discussion, but keeping it very focussed at the start will help to keep it focussed to the end. I think. Other comments? Andrewa ( talk) 18:35, 29 June 2017 (UTC)
The order of the points made in the rationale was questioned (I forget where exactly and by whom) and I am only just getting around to replying.
The main section is of course the rationale itself.
The first argument 1. Improved reader experience. comes before the second because the second refers back to the first.
Within this, the first bullet point Many readers search on New York wanting New York City, and load a large unwanted page as a result. The DAB loads in a far shorter time, particularly important for mobile and low bandwidth readers comes first because readers are our bottom line. The second Many mislinkings are created by editors who assume that the destination of a wikilink to New York is the city. Correcting these mislinkings occupies a large amount of editor time which would otherwise be available to improve the encyclopedia is about editors, not readers directly.
As stated above, the second argument 2. Compliance to official policy and guidelines. It has been established that the state is not the primary topic of New York. This article title therefore cannot be used for the article on the state. (And it should be noted that the guidelines appear to be correct in this, see reason 1 above.) refers to the first. It is more logical for it to therefore follow it.
The final section Primary topic: It has been suggested that the primary topic of New York is New York City. A second RM is proposed after an interval of time still to be determined (but one year has been suggested) to determine this issue is not part of the rationale proper. But it is included in the rationale because it is an essential part of the proposal, and like the rationale should not be edited after the RM is opened. Andrewa ( talk) 04:03, 1 July 2017 (UTC)
On reflection I have removed all content from the discussion section.
Comments? Andrewa ( talk) 18:58, 29 June 2017 (UTC)
That's certainly brief and to the point. I like the emphasis on providing the best destination for New York. That may be where we went wrong in last year's RM: we gave the impression that evicting the state article was our main aim, when in fact it was just a side effect of getting a better page onto that title.
I would consider adding:
We can manage without the Refutation of counterarguments section but I'll keep my attempt handy as a cheat sheet for when the opposition arrives. Certes ( talk) 00:26, 30 June 2017 (UTC)
The title of a disambiguation page is the ambiguous term itself, provided there is no primary topic for that term., i.e. no Foo (disambiguation) qualifier. Certes ( talk) 08:52, 30 June 2017 (UTC)
This edit and the discussion that led to it are very relevant IMO.
As I said in reply there, I think that this is the most important single issue in framing this RM.
I think the balance is about right here already. Interested in other views of course.
My conviction is that we as nominators should neither support nor oppose the claim that NYC is the PT. This RM should claim only that Wikipedia will be improved by this proposed move, and seek consensus on that, not predicting either way how the foreshadowed second RM will go.
And I think this is very important. Andrewa ( talk) 23:27, 30 June 2017 (UTC)
At the risk of batting for the opposition, is it fair to suggest a moratorium only if the RM succeeds? I wouldn't want us to be accused of holding a neverendum. Certes ( talk) 00:21, 1 July 2017 (UTC)
I have added these on the suggestion of BD2412. [3] I can argue it both ways, but on balance I think it's better. As I said in reply, discussion really belongs in the Discussion section, but realistically this is unlikely. Andrewa ( talk) 02:36, 1 July 2017 (UTC)
Referring to this draft (unfortunately a redlink in the post):
An August 2016 RfC has concluded that the State of New York cannot be the primary topic for the term "New York", due to the prominence of New York City being often called "New York", and to a lesser extent due to the existence of numerous other topics titled "New York", including songs, books, films, ships, sports teams, the New York metropolitan area, New York County, the historical Province of New York and a bunch of eponymous cities.
Consequently, the existing disambiguation page must be moved to the base title "New York", and the state article requires a qualifier to distinguish it from the city and other uses of the term. A July 2016 discussion on preferred qualifiers has shown overwhelming support for New York (state) vs New York State or State of New York as a destination title. The change will ease navigation and search for readers, and will bring consistency with similar cases such as Washington (state) vs Washington, D.C. and Georgia (U.S. state) vs Georgia (country).
Amakuru observed
FWIW I like the fact that it mentions the August RfC explicitly, rather than hiding it behind a piped link with some other text as yours does. It also conveys all the information within two sentences of prose, no bullet points. Beyond that, though, I'm happy with anything that is clear and mentions the key points! [4]
Both of these points could be incorporated into my draft, but interested to see JFG's latest draft before doing any more work on mine.
I can make some specific criticisms of the early one. I would add a link to the specific guideline that says the ambiguous title cannot be used. I'd also tidy up some of the grammar. Andrewa ( talk) 17:08, 4 July 2017 (UTC)
I have had a go at not hiding the RfC, and removing the bullet points. I don't think it's an improvement. Other comments? Andrewa ( talk) 21:36, 5 July 2017 (UTC)
On reflection, the RfC mention was an improvement, but not the bullet point removal IMO.
The removal of the bullet points is now the only suggestion yet that I haven't adopted into the current version of the draft. Andrewa ( talk) 22:53, 5 July 2017 (UTC)
Talk:New York/Proposed move#Another reason to think about makes an excellent point.
This proposed move benefits those looking for NYS, not just those looking for NYC. It's so obvious when you look at the case presented there. Lateral thinking at its best. Andrewa ( talk) 21:12, 5 July 2017 (UTC)
Couldn't resist... added it. Andrewa ( talk) 21:30, 5 July 2017 (UTC)
I've started a personal cheatsheet, see User talk:Andrewa/Things to discuss during the NYRM July 2017. Andrewa ( talk) 21:47, 5 July 2017 (UTC)
Obsoleted by NYRM2017, where sanity finally prevailed, and User:Andrewa/NYRM2018. Kept for historical reasons. |
If this draft is accepted, then we copy and paste (almost, I recommend that we re-expand the template using subst:requested move all over again just to prevent any unforeseen glitches) to talk:New York, and as many as are willing (and who agree 100% with the rationale) sign to support as proposers. Existing signatures would be removed and replaced by fresh ones.
JFG, does this help? Does it look at all like what you have in mind?
I'm quite prepared to propose it, but I'd like to hear from you first, in fairness to you and also to get the best possible result. Andrewa ( talk) 01:56, 29 June 2017 (UTC)
This page was only intended as a braindump to help me to comment on the proposal that JFG is preparing when it emerges... part of my homework while waiting.
But this section turned out exceptionally well IMO.
I don't think it needs expansion, and I don't think we can leave anything there out. There is much more that could be said and will be said I'm sure during the discussion, but keeping it very focussed at the start will help to keep it focussed to the end. I think. Other comments? Andrewa ( talk) 18:35, 29 June 2017 (UTC)
The order of the points made in the rationale was questioned (I forget where exactly and by whom) and I am only just getting around to replying.
The main section is of course the rationale itself.
The first argument 1. Improved reader experience. comes before the second because the second refers back to the first.
Within this, the first bullet point Many readers search on New York wanting New York City, and load a large unwanted page as a result. The DAB loads in a far shorter time, particularly important for mobile and low bandwidth readers comes first because readers are our bottom line. The second Many mislinkings are created by editors who assume that the destination of a wikilink to New York is the city. Correcting these mislinkings occupies a large amount of editor time which would otherwise be available to improve the encyclopedia is about editors, not readers directly.
As stated above, the second argument 2. Compliance to official policy and guidelines. It has been established that the state is not the primary topic of New York. This article title therefore cannot be used for the article on the state. (And it should be noted that the guidelines appear to be correct in this, see reason 1 above.) refers to the first. It is more logical for it to therefore follow it.
The final section Primary topic: It has been suggested that the primary topic of New York is New York City. A second RM is proposed after an interval of time still to be determined (but one year has been suggested) to determine this issue is not part of the rationale proper. But it is included in the rationale because it is an essential part of the proposal, and like the rationale should not be edited after the RM is opened. Andrewa ( talk) 04:03, 1 July 2017 (UTC)
On reflection I have removed all content from the discussion section.
Comments? Andrewa ( talk) 18:58, 29 June 2017 (UTC)
That's certainly brief and to the point. I like the emphasis on providing the best destination for New York. That may be where we went wrong in last year's RM: we gave the impression that evicting the state article was our main aim, when in fact it was just a side effect of getting a better page onto that title.
I would consider adding:
We can manage without the Refutation of counterarguments section but I'll keep my attempt handy as a cheat sheet for when the opposition arrives. Certes ( talk) 00:26, 30 June 2017 (UTC)
The title of a disambiguation page is the ambiguous term itself, provided there is no primary topic for that term., i.e. no Foo (disambiguation) qualifier. Certes ( talk) 08:52, 30 June 2017 (UTC)
This edit and the discussion that led to it are very relevant IMO.
As I said in reply there, I think that this is the most important single issue in framing this RM.
I think the balance is about right here already. Interested in other views of course.
My conviction is that we as nominators should neither support nor oppose the claim that NYC is the PT. This RM should claim only that Wikipedia will be improved by this proposed move, and seek consensus on that, not predicting either way how the foreshadowed second RM will go.
And I think this is very important. Andrewa ( talk) 23:27, 30 June 2017 (UTC)
At the risk of batting for the opposition, is it fair to suggest a moratorium only if the RM succeeds? I wouldn't want us to be accused of holding a neverendum. Certes ( talk) 00:21, 1 July 2017 (UTC)
I have added these on the suggestion of BD2412. [3] I can argue it both ways, but on balance I think it's better. As I said in reply, discussion really belongs in the Discussion section, but realistically this is unlikely. Andrewa ( talk) 02:36, 1 July 2017 (UTC)
Referring to this draft (unfortunately a redlink in the post):
An August 2016 RfC has concluded that the State of New York cannot be the primary topic for the term "New York", due to the prominence of New York City being often called "New York", and to a lesser extent due to the existence of numerous other topics titled "New York", including songs, books, films, ships, sports teams, the New York metropolitan area, New York County, the historical Province of New York and a bunch of eponymous cities.
Consequently, the existing disambiguation page must be moved to the base title "New York", and the state article requires a qualifier to distinguish it from the city and other uses of the term. A July 2016 discussion on preferred qualifiers has shown overwhelming support for New York (state) vs New York State or State of New York as a destination title. The change will ease navigation and search for readers, and will bring consistency with similar cases such as Washington (state) vs Washington, D.C. and Georgia (U.S. state) vs Georgia (country).
Amakuru observed
FWIW I like the fact that it mentions the August RfC explicitly, rather than hiding it behind a piped link with some other text as yours does. It also conveys all the information within two sentences of prose, no bullet points. Beyond that, though, I'm happy with anything that is clear and mentions the key points! [4]
Both of these points could be incorporated into my draft, but interested to see JFG's latest draft before doing any more work on mine.
I can make some specific criticisms of the early one. I would add a link to the specific guideline that says the ambiguous title cannot be used. I'd also tidy up some of the grammar. Andrewa ( talk) 17:08, 4 July 2017 (UTC)
I have had a go at not hiding the RfC, and removing the bullet points. I don't think it's an improvement. Other comments? Andrewa ( talk) 21:36, 5 July 2017 (UTC)
On reflection, the RfC mention was an improvement, but not the bullet point removal IMO.
The removal of the bullet points is now the only suggestion yet that I haven't adopted into the current version of the draft. Andrewa ( talk) 22:53, 5 July 2017 (UTC)
Talk:New York/Proposed move#Another reason to think about makes an excellent point.
This proposed move benefits those looking for NYS, not just those looking for NYC. It's so obvious when you look at the case presented there. Lateral thinking at its best. Andrewa ( talk) 21:12, 5 July 2017 (UTC)
Couldn't resist... added it. Andrewa ( talk) 21:30, 5 July 2017 (UTC)
I've started a personal cheatsheet, see User talk:Andrewa/Things to discuss during the NYRM July 2017. Andrewa ( talk) 21:47, 5 July 2017 (UTC)