Looking at this article, it seems well written. Judging by the article, you have done a lot for your country and should be proud. :) As for the article: Based on Wiki policy, I would recommend you make major contributions to the article minimally. You should still monitor the article, reverting vandalism, making minor changes, and citing references.
There are only a few ways this article could be improved; it's already very good. Firstly, in the
education section, there should be minimal amounts of external links. I would recommend using internal links instead, or add the links to the External Links section. In addition, I would recommend the
thoughts and views section be put into
prose and paraphrased. That's about it. Keep it up! -download|sign! 22:57, 25 March 2009 (UTC)reply
Looking at this article, it seems well written. Judging by the article, you have done a lot for your country and should be proud. :) As for the article: Based on Wiki policy, I would recommend you make major contributions to the article minimally. You should still monitor the article, reverting vandalism, making minor changes, and citing references.
There are only a few ways this article could be improved; it's already very good. Firstly, in the
education section, there should be minimal amounts of external links. I would recommend using internal links instead, or add the links to the External Links section. In addition, I would recommend the
thoughts and views section be put into
prose and paraphrased. That's about it. Keep it up! -download|sign! 22:57, 25 March 2009 (UTC)reply