Hey,
theleekycauldron. I also like it. The link to Putin and his Rasputin makes the article current as she is no longer an activist. Thanks for contributing! Best regards,
Darwin Naz (
talk) 07:00, 6 July 2022 (UTC)
If you put "co-founded" instead of "founded" (she was one of 10 people who founded that organization) then that hook is fine with me. Please note that the name and link is to
Aleksandr Dugin, and not
Alexandr Dugin, per no redirects on the main page. Alexandr Dugin is a half transliteration of Александр Дугин.
Spokoyni (
talk) 07:41, 6 July 2022 (UTC)
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Darwin Naz: in the article, the only mention of Alexandr Dugin being referred to as Rasputin is cited to an NPR article, but the NPR source, but the source doesn't mention this comparison. Can you supply a source for this in the article? Thanks,
Z1720 (
talk) 19:01, 6 July 2022 (UTC)
Good catch, I've added the Milken Review article that the Bulwark article mentioned above references, and made it explicit who is making these comparisons.
Spokoyni (
talk) 20:01, 6 July 2022 (UTC)
My concern was resolved. Readding the tick per the original review.
Z1720 (
talk) 12:44, 12 July 2022 (UTC)
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The relevant information is mentioned within the article text itself, but I added a more obvious citation for it. I don't see why reverting my edit is a fair measure towards the complaints raised by 78.26 and Bloom6132. I also don't see what in the original article supports the church; I tried my best to restore everything from the original article. If the controversy stuff in the history section seems out of place, moving it out of there seems like a much more reasonable approach. elijahpepe@wikipedia (he/him) 04:34, 21 July 2022 (UTC)
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78.26 and
Bloom6132: I looked at the source, at it talks about being the largest Sunday School in the United States, not North America. Should the ALT0 hook be changed?
Z1720 (
talk) 17:03, 21 July 2022 (UTC)
Considering the size of the Akron Baptist Temple and the time period, I wouldn't put it past the church for holding the largest Sunday school in the United States or North America, but describing the church as having "one of" the largest Sunday schools in the United States would be a much better description. elijahpepe@wikipedia (he/him) 23:20, 24 July 2022 (UTC)
Hey,
theleekycauldron. I also like it. The link to Putin and his Rasputin makes the article current as she is no longer an activist. Thanks for contributing! Best regards,
Darwin Naz (
talk) 07:00, 6 July 2022 (UTC)
If you put "co-founded" instead of "founded" (she was one of 10 people who founded that organization) then that hook is fine with me. Please note that the name and link is to
Aleksandr Dugin, and not
Alexandr Dugin, per no redirects on the main page. Alexandr Dugin is a half transliteration of Александр Дугин.
Spokoyni (
talk) 07:41, 6 July 2022 (UTC)
@
Darwin Naz: in the article, the only mention of Alexandr Dugin being referred to as Rasputin is cited to an NPR article, but the NPR source, but the source doesn't mention this comparison. Can you supply a source for this in the article? Thanks,
Z1720 (
talk) 19:01, 6 July 2022 (UTC)
Good catch, I've added the Milken Review article that the Bulwark article mentioned above references, and made it explicit who is making these comparisons.
Spokoyni (
talk) 20:01, 6 July 2022 (UTC)
My concern was resolved. Readding the tick per the original review.
Z1720 (
talk) 12:44, 12 July 2022 (UTC)
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The relevant information is mentioned within the article text itself, but I added a more obvious citation for it. I don't see why reverting my edit is a fair measure towards the complaints raised by 78.26 and Bloom6132. I also don't see what in the original article supports the church; I tried my best to restore everything from the original article. If the controversy stuff in the history section seems out of place, moving it out of there seems like a much more reasonable approach. elijahpepe@wikipedia (he/him) 04:34, 21 July 2022 (UTC)
@
78.26 and
Bloom6132: I looked at the source, at it talks about being the largest Sunday School in the United States, not North America. Should the ALT0 hook be changed?
Z1720 (
talk) 17:03, 21 July 2022 (UTC)
Considering the size of the Akron Baptist Temple and the time period, I wouldn't put it past the church for holding the largest Sunday school in the United States or North America, but describing the church as having "one of" the largest Sunday schools in the United States would be a much better description. elijahpepe@wikipedia (he/him) 23:20, 24 July 2022 (UTC)