Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
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Squinard
This is a great start. I love the pictures--did you follow the wiki module on media to get those up? I hope they stay up!
I think you will want to improve your lead section--what defines this category? When did Black lives matter art start? Link it to the movement, and create a story of what the art is and what it does. Link to related wikipedia pages as well there.
I think each section needs to be expanded--you can have an overview of the category and then expand to include as many specific works as you can. ALSO you can use all of the relevant pieces from the AE Special Issue that we have been reading in class--from beginning to end there are tons of pieces and that text can count as a source.
Didnt we also read about a George Floyd mural in Palestine? what other art pieces did we read about?
Have you found any critical reception? Certainly there must be some conservative news sources or art critics who have negative things to say?
Keep going!
Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional Resources |
Squinard
This is a great start. I love the pictures--did you follow the wiki module on media to get those up? I hope they stay up!
I think you will want to improve your lead section--what defines this category? When did Black lives matter art start? Link it to the movement, and create a story of what the art is and what it does. Link to related wikipedia pages as well there.
I think each section needs to be expanded--you can have an overview of the category and then expand to include as many specific works as you can. ALSO you can use all of the relevant pieces from the AE Special Issue that we have been reading in class--from beginning to end there are tons of pieces and that text can count as a source.
Didnt we also read about a George Floyd mural in Palestine? what other art pieces did we read about?
Have you found any critical reception? Certainly there must be some conservative news sources or art critics who have negative things to say?
Keep going!