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Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
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Sherifa Osman
Lead
The lead paragraph includes date of building and location, but it doesn’t include information about what is presented in the following sections. Also the lead doesn’t have an introductory sentence.
Content
The content is great and is very detailed. I like how well-explained the architecture section is, and that you mentioned every aspect related to the building. I haven’t seen the religious affiliations in any other article. Great job, Sherifa.
Tone and balance
The information is provided in a neutral tone. You avoided using any biased tone or personal/exterior opinions, which is great.
Sources and References
The article is missing sources and references
Organization
I suggest dividing the architecture section into sub-titles. For example, section for the plan, section for the exterior details, section for the interior details, etc.. to help the reader find the information he needs easily.
Images and media
The article lacks visuals. I know it is hard to get a permission to use someone’s work for a newly published article. I have the same issue with my article as well.
Overall impression
The article is great in every mean and covers many aspects about the building. Great job, Sherifa. Keep up the great work.
![]() | Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional Resources |
Sherifa Osman
Lead
The lead paragraph includes date of building and location, but it doesn’t include information about what is presented in the following sections. Also the lead doesn’t have an introductory sentence.
Content
The content is great and is very detailed. I like how well-explained the architecture section is, and that you mentioned every aspect related to the building. I haven’t seen the religious affiliations in any other article. Great job, Sherifa.
Tone and balance
The information is provided in a neutral tone. You avoided using any biased tone or personal/exterior opinions, which is great.
Sources and References
The article is missing sources and references
Organization
I suggest dividing the architecture section into sub-titles. For example, section for the plan, section for the exterior details, section for the interior details, etc.. to help the reader find the information he needs easily.
Images and media
The article lacks visuals. I know it is hard to get a permission to use someone’s work for a newly published article. I have the same issue with my article as well.
Overall impression
The article is great in every mean and covers many aspects about the building. Great job, Sherifa. Keep up the great work.