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Article Evaluation Automobile Dependency 1.) Everything in this article seems relevant to the topic. Many of the sources seem to be almost ten years out of date, but I don't think this would produce much of a credibility issue. 2.) When reading this article, the author seems to have strong opinions against vehicles. This article doesn't seem to have any counter claims, or address any positive effects, if there are any. 3.) The sources seem to work and prove the article's facts. Most, but not all, of the facts have a citation linked to them. 4.) One of the talk comments seems anti-car, and another comment claims that the author has incorporated too much opinion.
Article Selection 1.) ( Roadway Noise) This article is relevant to the topic. It is written neutrally, but there are many claims that have needed citations. 2.) Other potential sources: /info/en/?search=Oil_depletion; /info/en/?search=Car_costs; /info/en/?search=Motor_vehicle_fatality_rate_in_U.S._by_year
Citation Vehicle costs should systematically be reevaluated to identify any places where money could be saved. [1]
Final Edits
Using Article ( Automobile Dependency)
1.) We have created a world in which automobiles are not only very convenient, but rather an absolute necessity. They have manifested themselves in every aspect of our daily lives, when commuting to work, school, the grocery store, etc. We have become entirely dependent on automobiles. [2]
2.) Noise Pollution - Traffic congestion has had negative effects on ambient wildlife. When traffic produces a noise frequency that overlaps with the frequency of an animal's mating call, it may be less likely to continue making these mating calls. This can stunt a species' reproduction, and potentially run the risk of extinction. [3]
3.) Oil Consumption - Globally, humans consume 85 million barrels every single day. Most cars take 2-6 liters of oil to run properly, and many cars burn about a quart every 1,000 miles without any major leaking issues. [4]
- ^ MacDougall, Alan. "Marvin K. Peterson Library at UNH". infoweb-newsbank-com.unh-proxy01.newhaven.edu. Retrieved 2018-11-14.
- ^ Turcotte, Martin (2008). "Dependence on cars in urban neighborhoods". Canadian Social Trends.
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^ Caorsi, Valentina Zaffaroni (8/30/2017). "Effects of traffic noise on the calling behavior of two Neotropical hylid frogs". PLOS ONE.
{{ cite journal}}: Check date values in:|date=( help) - ^ Korpela, Seppo (2006). "Oil depletion in the world". Current Science.
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Rmulh1. You can use it for testing or practicing edits. This is not the sandbox where you should draft your assigned article for a dashboard.wikiedu.org course. To find the right sandbox for your assignment, visit your Dashboard course page and follow the Sandbox Draft link for your assigned article in the My Articles section. |
Article Evaluation Automobile Dependency 1.) Everything in this article seems relevant to the topic. Many of the sources seem to be almost ten years out of date, but I don't think this would produce much of a credibility issue. 2.) When reading this article, the author seems to have strong opinions against vehicles. This article doesn't seem to have any counter claims, or address any positive effects, if there are any. 3.) The sources seem to work and prove the article's facts. Most, but not all, of the facts have a citation linked to them. 4.) One of the talk comments seems anti-car, and another comment claims that the author has incorporated too much opinion.
Article Selection 1.) ( Roadway Noise) This article is relevant to the topic. It is written neutrally, but there are many claims that have needed citations. 2.) Other potential sources: /info/en/?search=Oil_depletion; /info/en/?search=Car_costs; /info/en/?search=Motor_vehicle_fatality_rate_in_U.S._by_year
Citation Vehicle costs should systematically be reevaluated to identify any places where money could be saved. [1]
Final Edits
Using Article ( Automobile Dependency)
1.) We have created a world in which automobiles are not only very convenient, but rather an absolute necessity. They have manifested themselves in every aspect of our daily lives, when commuting to work, school, the grocery store, etc. We have become entirely dependent on automobiles. [2]
2.) Noise Pollution - Traffic congestion has had negative effects on ambient wildlife. When traffic produces a noise frequency that overlaps with the frequency of an animal's mating call, it may be less likely to continue making these mating calls. This can stunt a species' reproduction, and potentially run the risk of extinction. [3]
3.) Oil Consumption - Globally, humans consume 85 million barrels every single day. Most cars take 2-6 liters of oil to run properly, and many cars burn about a quart every 1,000 miles without any major leaking issues. [4]
- ^ MacDougall, Alan. "Marvin K. Peterson Library at UNH". infoweb-newsbank-com.unh-proxy01.newhaven.edu. Retrieved 2018-11-14.
- ^ Turcotte, Martin (2008). "Dependence on cars in urban neighborhoods". Canadian Social Trends.
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^ Caorsi, Valentina Zaffaroni (8/30/2017). "Effects of traffic noise on the calling behavior of two Neotropical hylid frogs". PLOS ONE.
{{ cite journal}}: Check date values in:|date=( help) - ^ Korpela, Seppo (2006). "Oil depletion in the world". Current Science.