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RiShebaB13

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I would add a period at the end of "Individuals with Pitt-Hopkins syndrome have episodes of heavy breathing". I might also recommend using "they" instead of "he or she" in "If a person shows 9 cardinal features, he or she is classified as having PTHS." Changing the word person to individual is also something I would change. Other than this, I admire the conciseness and detailed updates.

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

RiShebaB13

Link to draft you're reviewing
Sandbox
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Article

Evaluate the drafted changes

I would add a period at the end of "Individuals with Pitt-Hopkins syndrome have episodes of heavy breathing". I might also recommend using "they" instead of "he or she" in "If a person shows 9 cardinal features, he or she is classified as having PTHS." Changing the word person to individual is also something I would change. Other than this, I admire the conciseness and detailed updates.


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