 | Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional Resources |
- Whose work are you reviewing?
(Palizerc, Kucharczj)
- Link to draft you're reviewing
- /info/en/?search=User:PedB03/Aquaphobia?veaction=edit&prbreload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
- Bipolar II disorder - Wikipedia
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)
overall your work looks good.
There is one punctuation corrections to make. I have put a line through the duplicate word for you.
You might want to add in more research about children and teens in this article it really doesn't talk to much about that age group having this disorder. This could add for another medical reference for your paper.
Your references look good and link well you may want to add a bit more references as five was the minimum but this should be easy with a few more sections to be added. Maybe think about adding some pictures also.
You also want to remember to take out the lead where you have typed Introductory Sentence, and Summary.
I would also suggest a few items in treatment and comorbidity.
You are doing a great job.
ChaseArmy
Introductory Sentence: Bipolar II is a disorder categorized by the DSM-5 under anxiety and mood disorders, potentially causing mass distress in a person's life if gone untreated.
Summary: Although different from Bipolar I disorder, Bipolar II shares some similar qualities, including a depressive episode and a form of a manic episode. Manic episodes are split in to two categories, being a full manic episode or a hypomanic episode. Bipolar II disorder is distinguished by a hypomanic episode, and either preceded or followed by a major depressive episode.
Article body
It is worth noting, a person with bipolar II disorder has normal mood in between the emotional episodes of this disorder. Although bipolar II disorder and and major depressive disorder shows significant similar symptoms, there are specific differences that separate their diagnoses, the largest symptom being hypomanic episodes.
Hypomania
Mania is described as a period of time, usually lasting around a week, that a person experiences extremes highs and emotional intensity. This intense emotional state can include high energy, high productivity both in home life and work, little need for rest periods, and even a short mental fuse causing the individual to potentially become hostile.
Depression
Comorbidity
| Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional Resources |
- Whose work are you reviewing?
(Palizerc, Kucharczj)
- Link to draft you're reviewing
- /info/en/?search=User:PedB03/Aquaphobia?veaction=edit&prbreload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
- Bipolar II disorder - Wikipedia
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)
overall your work looks good.
There is one punctuation corrections to make. I have put a line through the duplicate word for you.
You might want to add in more research about children and teens in this article it really doesn't talk to much about that age group having this disorder. This could add for another medical reference for your paper.
Your references look good and link well you may want to add a bit more references as five was the minimum but this should be easy with a few more sections to be added. Maybe think about adding some pictures also.
You also want to remember to take out the lead where you have typed Introductory Sentence, and Summary.
I would also suggest a few items in treatment and comorbidity.
You are doing a great job.
ChaseArmy
Introductory Sentence: Bipolar II is a disorder categorized by the DSM-5 under anxiety and mood disorders, potentially causing mass distress in a person's life if gone untreated.
Summary: Although different from Bipolar I disorder, Bipolar II shares some similar qualities, including a depressive episode and a form of a manic episode. Manic episodes are split in to two categories, being a full manic episode or a hypomanic episode. Bipolar II disorder is distinguished by a hypomanic episode, and either preceded or followed by a major depressive episode.
Article body
It is worth noting, a person with bipolar II disorder has normal mood in between the emotional episodes of this disorder. Although bipolar II disorder and and major depressive disorder shows significant similar symptoms, there are specific differences that separate their diagnoses, the largest symptom being hypomanic episodes.
Hypomania
Mania is described as a period of time, usually lasting around a week, that a person experiences extremes highs and emotional intensity. This intense emotional state can include high energy, high productivity both in home life and work, little need for rest periods, and even a short mental fuse causing the individual to potentially become hostile.
Depression
Comorbidity