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Isocrates

Evaluate the drafted changes

Lead:

  • The Lead had been updated to account for new content
  • The Lead does include an introductory sentence
  • The Lead covers most sections of the article
  • Original final sentence is probably fine the way it was before the edits.

Content

  • New title for Family to become Early Life and influences is more descriptive of what is talked about
  • New content is meaningful. Allows reader to know of the other brothers names should they want to know

Tone

  • Tone is neutral

Sources

  • Sources are from a reputable site and book

Organization

  • Content is organized appropriately. Ex: the fact isocrates has brothers is introduced and then their names are given

Images

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From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

MinervaNix

Link to draft you're reviewing
/info/en/?search=User:MinervaNix/Isocrates?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Isocrates

Evaluate the drafted changes

Lead:

  • The Lead had been updated to account for new content
  • The Lead does include an introductory sentence
  • The Lead covers most sections of the article
  • Original final sentence is probably fine the way it was before the edits.

Content

  • New title for Family to become Early Life and influences is more descriptive of what is talked about
  • New content is meaningful. Allows reader to know of the other brothers names should they want to know

Tone

  • Tone is neutral

Sources

  • Sources are from a reputable site and book

Organization

  • Content is organized appropriately. Ex: the fact isocrates has brothers is introduced and then their names are given

Images

  • No images added

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