[1]Article Evaluation Information
Article chosen : Anne Frank
Content: totally related to the subject with a lot of information and subcategories, very well structured
Tone: no bias
Sources: variety of sources that are working
Talk Page : very few recommandations that are details
This page does not need particular attention, a lot of work has already been done and sources are reliable
Major contributions:
1-Introductory paragraph : work on structure, rephrasing, tense, verbs, make everything clear, understandable and above all serious and professional (had to rewrite almost all the section)
2-Gender Trouble section : work on structure, rephrasing, tense, verbs, make everything clear, understandable and above all serious and professional (had to rewrite almost all the section)
3-Biographie section: work on structure, rephrasing, tense, verbs, make everything clear, understandable and above all serious and professional (had to rewrite almost all the section)
4- Under publication section : add of two new publications in subsection ‘Annees 2010’ (in English 2010s)
5- add of references + citations (especially in the introductory part to increase the credibility of the article)
6- reorganization of structure à suppression of subsection prices and awards under the private life and creation of a whole section ‘Prix’ (Awards) at the end of the article as I consider prices and distinctions should not be at the top of the Wikipedia page but rather at the end, just before the references + add of citations and references related to it
Minor contributions:
7- suppression of reference to Russell Tribunal (Palestine). This information does not make sense in the context where it was written.
8- add of content in biography part (universities where she taught) + citations and references
‘DID YOU KNOW?’ JUDITH BUTLER’S GROUP - MARGAUX APPEL
Did you know? (Le Saviez Vous?)
When written in French, it means I put the 'did you know' on the French version of 'Did You Know', when in English it means I put it on the English speaking version!
1 -Judith Butler a refusé le prix courage lors de la Gay pride de Berlin. En cause? Le « nationalisme gay » qu'elle déplore! à translation Judith Butler has refused the price of courage during a gay pride in Berlin. Why? She denounces the presence of gay nationalism!
2- Judith Butler est une des plus importantes théoristes du genre vivante! à translation Judith Butler is one of the most important gender theorist alive!
3- Judith Butler is a defender of gay and lesbians rights!
4 - Judith Butler's major work is ''Gender Trouble: Feminism and the Subversion of Identity'' !
[1]Article Evaluation Information
Article chosen : Anne Frank
Content: totally related to the subject with a lot of information and subcategories, very well structured
Tone: no bias
Sources: variety of sources that are working
Talk Page : very few recommandations that are details
This page does not need particular attention, a lot of work has already been done and sources are reliable
Major contributions:
1-Introductory paragraph : work on structure, rephrasing, tense, verbs, make everything clear, understandable and above all serious and professional (had to rewrite almost all the section)
2-Gender Trouble section : work on structure, rephrasing, tense, verbs, make everything clear, understandable and above all serious and professional (had to rewrite almost all the section)
3-Biographie section: work on structure, rephrasing, tense, verbs, make everything clear, understandable and above all serious and professional (had to rewrite almost all the section)
4- Under publication section : add of two new publications in subsection ‘Annees 2010’ (in English 2010s)
5- add of references + citations (especially in the introductory part to increase the credibility of the article)
6- reorganization of structure à suppression of subsection prices and awards under the private life and creation of a whole section ‘Prix’ (Awards) at the end of the article as I consider prices and distinctions should not be at the top of the Wikipedia page but rather at the end, just before the references + add of citations and references related to it
Minor contributions:
7- suppression of reference to Russell Tribunal (Palestine). This information does not make sense in the context where it was written.
8- add of content in biography part (universities where she taught) + citations and references
‘DID YOU KNOW?’ JUDITH BUTLER’S GROUP - MARGAUX APPEL
Did you know? (Le Saviez Vous?)
When written in French, it means I put the 'did you know' on the French version of 'Did You Know', when in English it means I put it on the English speaking version!
1 -Judith Butler a refusé le prix courage lors de la Gay pride de Berlin. En cause? Le « nationalisme gay » qu'elle déplore! à translation Judith Butler has refused the price of courage during a gay pride in Berlin. Why? She denounces the presence of gay nationalism!
2- Judith Butler est une des plus importantes théoristes du genre vivante! à translation Judith Butler is one of the most important gender theorist alive!
3- Judith Butler is a defender of gay and lesbians rights!
4 - Judith Butler's major work is ''Gender Trouble: Feminism and the Subversion of Identity'' !