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  1. The article has a nice flow between sections and I liked how detailed the clean up methods were.
  2. I would put the causes and effects of oil spills first, so then it could lead into the effects on coral reef communities and impact on coral reef structure. I would also make some grammatical changes (condense sentence two and three in impacts on coral reef communities). Additionally, I suggest to avoid using the same few words to start every sentence. It will aid in the flow of the section within the article.
  3. All parts of the article are very informative with a neutral tone. It feels like a very comprehensive understanding of oil spills that does not have a biased opinion. It does not leave our any perspectives that could have been mentioned.
  4. The sources are reliable are appear to mainly be from journals or books. There were not an unbalanced amount of sources per sentences.
  5. There is no lead that has been updates with the new content and there is no introductory sentence.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)

Link to draft you're reviewing
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

  1. The article has a nice flow between sections and I liked how detailed the clean up methods were.
  2. I would put the causes and effects of oil spills first, so then it could lead into the effects on coral reef communities and impact on coral reef structure. I would also make some grammatical changes (condense sentence two and three in impacts on coral reef communities). Additionally, I suggest to avoid using the same few words to start every sentence. It will aid in the flow of the section within the article.
  3. All parts of the article are very informative with a neutral tone. It feels like a very comprehensive understanding of oil spills that does not have a biased opinion. It does not leave our any perspectives that could have been mentioned.
  4. The sources are reliable are appear to mainly be from journals or books. There were not an unbalanced amount of sources per sentences.
  5. There is no lead that has been updates with the new content and there is no introductory sentence.

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