-Main plan as of now (09/06/2018) is to correct grammar and make the article more reader-friendly. Will also substantiate claims made in the article with further research article citations.
Title: Medical Care Use and Expenditures Associated with Adult Obesity in the United States [1]
-Provides useful infographics for understanding health care costs for obese individuals, also compares them to "healthy"/non-obese patients
Included three links that do not redirect anywhere
Tone appears neutral and informative
Links appear to be working, and reference generally accepted sources
No conversations are occurring on the "talk" page, and the article is rated of low importance and of stub-class
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- ^ Biener, Adam I.; Decker, Sandra L. (2018-01-16). "Medical Care Use and Expenditures Associated With Adult Obesity in the United States". JAMA. 319 (3): 218. doi: 10.1001/jama.2017.21063. ISSN 0098-7484.
-Main plan as of now (09/06/2018) is to correct grammar and make the article more reader-friendly. Will also substantiate claims made in the article with further research article citations.
Title: Medical Care Use and Expenditures Associated with Adult Obesity in the United States [1]
-Provides useful infographics for understanding health care costs for obese individuals, also compares them to "healthy"/non-obese patients
Included three links that do not redirect anywhere
Tone appears neutral and informative
Links appear to be working, and reference generally accepted sources
No conversations are occurring on the "talk" page, and the article is rated of low importance and of stub-class
| This is a user sandbox of
Kkb1234. You can use it for testing or practicing edits. This is not the sandbox where you should draft your assigned article for a dashboard.wikiedu.org course. To find the right sandbox for your assignment, visit your Dashboard course page and follow the Sandbox Draft link for your assigned article in the My Articles section. |
- ^ Biener, Adam I.; Decker, Sandra L. (2018-01-16). "Medical Care Use and Expenditures Associated With Adult Obesity in the United States". JAMA. 319 (3): 218. doi: 10.1001/jama.2017.21063. ISSN 0098-7484.