![]() | Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional ResourcesCheck out the Editing Wikipedia PDF for general editing tips and suggestions. |
Kayap1
The article body you contributed was well written and informative. I like all the links you added to the terms that might not be well known, such as transepidermal water loss, or lipid bilayer. The information was neutral and straight to the point. However, I had trouble clicking on the reference link. When I clicked on the "^" symbol, I did not get taken to the website listed. I suggest adding the link the same way you added it to the terms you used in the paragraph.
Lastly, I would have liked to see more information added to the article. I'm not sure if the website is just glitching on my end, but I can only see one paragraph and one link in the sandbox draft.
All in all, I think the contribution you made suits the article well.
![]() | Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional ResourcesCheck out the Editing Wikipedia PDF for general editing tips and suggestions. |
Kayap1
The article body you contributed was well written and informative. I like all the links you added to the terms that might not be well known, such as transepidermal water loss, or lipid bilayer. The information was neutral and straight to the point. However, I had trouble clicking on the reference link. When I clicked on the "^" symbol, I did not get taken to the website listed. I suggest adding the link the same way you added it to the terms you used in the paragraph.
Lastly, I would have liked to see more information added to the article. I'm not sure if the website is just glitching on my end, but I can only see one paragraph and one link in the sandbox draft.
All in all, I think the contribution you made suits the article well.