Article Evaluation
Article: Nurse practitioner
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Article 1: Elizabeth Robertson
/info/en/?search=Elizabeth_Robertson
• This proposed modified article meets topic requirements in that it this article is about a female scientist which involves gender that is linked to oppression and involves science.
• This proposed modified article meets scope-of-work requirements in that I could expand the article 5-fold because it is presently very short and brief. The summary at the top of the article is comprised on only three sentences. The article is made up of only 2 sections: Life and Awards & Honors. The only extensive section is the Awards & Honors section. There are no images included on the page. It is of interest to two WikiProjects but is currently rated stub-class. No conversations were found on the “Talk” page.
• Reliable source:
Strauss, Evelyn. "Elizabeth Robertson." The Rockefeller University, www.rockefeller.edu/greengard-prize/recipients/robertson/. Accessed 10 Oct. 2018.
Article 2: Claudie Haigneré
/info/en/?search=Claudie_Haigneré
• This proposed modified article meets topic requirements in that it this article is about a female scientist which involves gender that is linked to oppression and involves science.
• This proposed modified article meets scope-of-work requirements in that I could expand the article 5-fold because it is presently very underdeveloped and is rated stub-class. The summary at the top of the article is only a single sentence. Her former occupations are listed as a French doctor, politician and astronaut. She does not have a specific section for her career as a doctor. Her space career has a section but only summarizes her career in paragraph. Her political career also has a section, but it only contains 2 sentences. She has a section for her honors which comprises of one sentence. The page also includes a section regarding her suicide attempt which only states in 2 sentences that she attempted suicide and what the probable cause might’ve been. There was only one section in the “Talk” page which was about her alleged suicide attempt.
• Reliable source:
The Editors of Encyclopædia Britannica. "Claudie Haigneré." Encyclopedia Britannica, 2018 Encyclopædia Britannica, Inc., 10 Feb. 2009, www.britannica.com/biography/Claudie-Haignere.
Accessed 10 Oct. 2018.
Article 3: Karen Steel
• This proposed modified article meets topic requirements in that it this article is about a female scientist which involves gender that is linked to oppression and involves science.
• This proposed modified article meets scope-of-work requirements in that I could expand the article 5-fold because it is currently rated stub-class and only contains 3 brief sections which are: Education, Research and Awards & Honors. Her education section is only comprised of a brief paragraph of the education she received. The education section also included some information about Steel setting up a research program at the MRC Institute of Hearing Research in Nottingham which doesn’t seem to fit in this section. The research section does not reflect her extensive involvement in research and is comprised of only 3 sentences. Is very vague and only gives a brief overview of the type of research she has done and continues to do. There were no conversations on the “Talk” page. The article is of interest to 2 WikiProjects but is rated stub-class. There have been only 35 revisions since October 2013, with the last revision being on November 9, 2016.
• Reliable source:
"Karen Steel." Wellcome Sanger Institute, www.sanger.ac.uk/people/faculty/honorary-faculty/karen-steel. Accessed 10 Oct. 2018.
Wikipedia Exercise 6: Finalize Your Topic
Chosen/Assigned article: Article 2: Claudie Haigneré
/info/en/?search=Claudie_Haigneré
This proposed modified article meets topic requirements in that it this article is about a female scientist which involves gender that is linked to oppression and involves science.
• This proposed modified article meets scope-of-work requirements in that I could expand the article 5-fold because it is presently very underdeveloped and is rated stub-class. The summary at the top of the article is only a single sentence. Her former occupations are listed as a French doctor, politician and astronaut. She does not have a specific section for her career as a doctor. Her space career has a section but only summarizes her career in paragraph. Her political career also has a section, but it only contains 2 sentences. She has a section for her honors which comprises of one sentence. The page also includes a section regarding her suicide attempt which only states in 2 sentences that she attempted suicide and what the probable cause might’ve been. There was only one section in the “Talk” page which was about her alleged suicide attempt.
I determined "scope of work" by the 5-fold expansion and documenting areas of work and progressing using Wikipedia tool provided by Dr. Lehr. My article is still in stub-class. When I am done with your work this quarter I plan on expanding the Lead Section as well as the Article sections since they do not contain much information. I may add new sections as I see appropriate. I plan on adding references for every statement that I add and find references to support the sentences already on the page that do not have supporting references.
Additional sources:
"Claudie Haigneré (Formerly Claudie André-Deshays)." European Space Agency,
www.esa.int/Our_Activites/Human_Spaceflight/Astronauts/Claudie_Haignere_formerly_Claudie_Andre-Deshays. Accessed 19 Oct. 2018.
"Claudie Haigneré." Sanofi, www.sanofi.com/en/about-us/governance/board-of-directors/claudie-haignere. Accessed 18 Oct. 2018.
Seaburn, Paul. "'Earth Must be Warned!'-Astronaut's Caution Surfaces Again." Mysterious
Universe, 8 Nov. 2016, mysteriousuniverse.org/2016/11/earth-must-be-warned-
astronauts-caution-surfaces-again/. Accessed 19 Oct. 2018.
Dismukes, Kim. "Expedition Three Crew Soyuz 3." National Aeronautics and Space Administration, NASA, 15. Oct. 2003,
spaceflight.nasa.gov/station/crew/exp3/taxi3/haignere.html. Accessed 31 Oct. 2018.
The Editors of Encyclopædia Britannica. "Claudie Haigneré." Encyclopedia Britannica, 2018 Encyclopædia Britannica, Inc., 10 Feb. 2009, www.britannica.com/biography/Claudie-Haignere.
MultiChoice Africa. "Claudie Haigneré, first European female astronaut to chair Jury of the DStv Eutelsat Star Awards." Eutelsat, Eutelsat Communications S.A., 19 Jan. 2017, news.eutelsat.com/pressreleases/claudie-haignere-first-female-astronaut-to-chair-jury-of-the-dstv-eutelsat-star-awards-1755261. Accessed 28 Nov. 2018.
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Claudie Haigneré | |
---|---|
Born |
Le Creusot, France | 13 May 1957
Status | Retired |
Nationality | French |
Occupation(s) | Doctor, medical researcher, ESA astronaut, and independent CEO at Universcience. |
Awards | |
Space career | |
CNES/ ESA astronaut | |
Time in space | 25d 14h 22min |
Selection |
1985 CNES Group 2 1999 ESA Group |
Missions |
Soyuz TM-24, Mir-Cassiopée,
TM-23, Soyuz TM-33, ISS-Andromède, TM-32 |
Mission insignia |
[Add story about watching Neil Armstrong]
Claudie Haigneré married Jean-Pierre Haigneré, who was also a former ESA astronaut, in 2001 and together they had one daughter, Carla, in 1998. [1] (add source about daughter here)
Claudie Haigneré was born on May 13, 1957 in Le Creusot, France. Haigneré and studied medicine at the Faculté de Médecine (Paris-Cochin) and Faculté des Sciences (Paris-VII). She went on to obtain certificates in biology and sports medicine (1981), aviation and space medicine (1982), biomechanics and physiology of movement (1986) and received her doctorate in rheumatology (1984) and neuroscience (1992). [2](add additional source here).
Haigneré medical career included working as a medical researcher as well as a doctor. Haigneré conducted research as well as applied diagnostic and therapeutic techniques in both rheumatology and sports traumatology at the Rheumatology Clinic and the Rehabilitation Department at Cochin Hospital in Paris (insert NASA source here). After reading a message on the hospital noticeboard that stated that France's space centre was looking for astronauts, Haigneré began training to become an astronaut.
autogenerated1
was invoked but never defined (see the
help page).Article Evaluation
Article: Nurse practitioner
This is a user sandbox of
Kaosuna. You can use it for testing or practicing edits. This is not the sandbox where you should draft your assigned article for a dashboard.wikiedu.org course. To find the right sandbox for your assignment, visit your Dashboard course page and follow the Sandbox Draft link for your assigned article in the My Articles section. |
Article 1: Elizabeth Robertson
/info/en/?search=Elizabeth_Robertson
• This proposed modified article meets topic requirements in that it this article is about a female scientist which involves gender that is linked to oppression and involves science.
• This proposed modified article meets scope-of-work requirements in that I could expand the article 5-fold because it is presently very short and brief. The summary at the top of the article is comprised on only three sentences. The article is made up of only 2 sections: Life and Awards & Honors. The only extensive section is the Awards & Honors section. There are no images included on the page. It is of interest to two WikiProjects but is currently rated stub-class. No conversations were found on the “Talk” page.
• Reliable source:
Strauss, Evelyn. "Elizabeth Robertson." The Rockefeller University, www.rockefeller.edu/greengard-prize/recipients/robertson/. Accessed 10 Oct. 2018.
Article 2: Claudie Haigneré
/info/en/?search=Claudie_Haigneré
• This proposed modified article meets topic requirements in that it this article is about a female scientist which involves gender that is linked to oppression and involves science.
• This proposed modified article meets scope-of-work requirements in that I could expand the article 5-fold because it is presently very underdeveloped and is rated stub-class. The summary at the top of the article is only a single sentence. Her former occupations are listed as a French doctor, politician and astronaut. She does not have a specific section for her career as a doctor. Her space career has a section but only summarizes her career in paragraph. Her political career also has a section, but it only contains 2 sentences. She has a section for her honors which comprises of one sentence. The page also includes a section regarding her suicide attempt which only states in 2 sentences that she attempted suicide and what the probable cause might’ve been. There was only one section in the “Talk” page which was about her alleged suicide attempt.
• Reliable source:
The Editors of Encyclopædia Britannica. "Claudie Haigneré." Encyclopedia Britannica, 2018 Encyclopædia Britannica, Inc., 10 Feb. 2009, www.britannica.com/biography/Claudie-Haignere.
Accessed 10 Oct. 2018.
Article 3: Karen Steel
• This proposed modified article meets topic requirements in that it this article is about a female scientist which involves gender that is linked to oppression and involves science.
• This proposed modified article meets scope-of-work requirements in that I could expand the article 5-fold because it is currently rated stub-class and only contains 3 brief sections which are: Education, Research and Awards & Honors. Her education section is only comprised of a brief paragraph of the education she received. The education section also included some information about Steel setting up a research program at the MRC Institute of Hearing Research in Nottingham which doesn’t seem to fit in this section. The research section does not reflect her extensive involvement in research and is comprised of only 3 sentences. Is very vague and only gives a brief overview of the type of research she has done and continues to do. There were no conversations on the “Talk” page. The article is of interest to 2 WikiProjects but is rated stub-class. There have been only 35 revisions since October 2013, with the last revision being on November 9, 2016.
• Reliable source:
"Karen Steel." Wellcome Sanger Institute, www.sanger.ac.uk/people/faculty/honorary-faculty/karen-steel. Accessed 10 Oct. 2018.
Wikipedia Exercise 6: Finalize Your Topic
Chosen/Assigned article: Article 2: Claudie Haigneré
/info/en/?search=Claudie_Haigneré
This proposed modified article meets topic requirements in that it this article is about a female scientist which involves gender that is linked to oppression and involves science.
• This proposed modified article meets scope-of-work requirements in that I could expand the article 5-fold because it is presently very underdeveloped and is rated stub-class. The summary at the top of the article is only a single sentence. Her former occupations are listed as a French doctor, politician and astronaut. She does not have a specific section for her career as a doctor. Her space career has a section but only summarizes her career in paragraph. Her political career also has a section, but it only contains 2 sentences. She has a section for her honors which comprises of one sentence. The page also includes a section regarding her suicide attempt which only states in 2 sentences that she attempted suicide and what the probable cause might’ve been. There was only one section in the “Talk” page which was about her alleged suicide attempt.
I determined "scope of work" by the 5-fold expansion and documenting areas of work and progressing using Wikipedia tool provided by Dr. Lehr. My article is still in stub-class. When I am done with your work this quarter I plan on expanding the Lead Section as well as the Article sections since they do not contain much information. I may add new sections as I see appropriate. I plan on adding references for every statement that I add and find references to support the sentences already on the page that do not have supporting references.
Additional sources:
"Claudie Haigneré (Formerly Claudie André-Deshays)." European Space Agency,
www.esa.int/Our_Activites/Human_Spaceflight/Astronauts/Claudie_Haignere_formerly_Claudie_Andre-Deshays. Accessed 19 Oct. 2018.
"Claudie Haigneré." Sanofi, www.sanofi.com/en/about-us/governance/board-of-directors/claudie-haignere. Accessed 18 Oct. 2018.
Seaburn, Paul. "'Earth Must be Warned!'-Astronaut's Caution Surfaces Again." Mysterious
Universe, 8 Nov. 2016, mysteriousuniverse.org/2016/11/earth-must-be-warned-
astronauts-caution-surfaces-again/. Accessed 19 Oct. 2018.
Dismukes, Kim. "Expedition Three Crew Soyuz 3." National Aeronautics and Space Administration, NASA, 15. Oct. 2003,
spaceflight.nasa.gov/station/crew/exp3/taxi3/haignere.html. Accessed 31 Oct. 2018.
The Editors of Encyclopædia Britannica. "Claudie Haigneré." Encyclopedia Britannica, 2018 Encyclopædia Britannica, Inc., 10 Feb. 2009, www.britannica.com/biography/Claudie-Haignere.
MultiChoice Africa. "Claudie Haigneré, first European female astronaut to chair Jury of the DStv Eutelsat Star Awards." Eutelsat, Eutelsat Communications S.A., 19 Jan. 2017, news.eutelsat.com/pressreleases/claudie-haignere-first-female-astronaut-to-chair-jury-of-the-dstv-eutelsat-star-awards-1755261. Accessed 28 Nov. 2018.
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Partially blanked as WP:COPYARTICLE
Claudie Haigneré | |
---|---|
Born |
Le Creusot, France | 13 May 1957
Status | Retired |
Nationality | French |
Occupation(s) | Doctor, medical researcher, ESA astronaut, and independent CEO at Universcience. |
Awards | |
Space career | |
CNES/ ESA astronaut | |
Time in space | 25d 14h 22min |
Selection |
1985 CNES Group 2 1999 ESA Group |
Missions |
Soyuz TM-24, Mir-Cassiopée,
TM-23, Soyuz TM-33, ISS-Andromède, TM-32 |
Mission insignia |
[Add story about watching Neil Armstrong]
Claudie Haigneré married Jean-Pierre Haigneré, who was also a former ESA astronaut, in 2001 and together they had one daughter, Carla, in 1998. [1] (add source about daughter here)
Claudie Haigneré was born on May 13, 1957 in Le Creusot, France. Haigneré and studied medicine at the Faculté de Médecine (Paris-Cochin) and Faculté des Sciences (Paris-VII). She went on to obtain certificates in biology and sports medicine (1981), aviation and space medicine (1982), biomechanics and physiology of movement (1986) and received her doctorate in rheumatology (1984) and neuroscience (1992). [2](add additional source here).
Haigneré medical career included working as a medical researcher as well as a doctor. Haigneré conducted research as well as applied diagnostic and therapeutic techniques in both rheumatology and sports traumatology at the Rheumatology Clinic and the Rehabilitation Department at Cochin Hospital in Paris (insert NASA source here). After reading a message on the hospital noticeboard that stated that France's space centre was looking for astronauts, Haigneré began training to become an astronaut.
autogenerated1
was invoked but never defined (see the
help page).