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JohnFrum1441
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Mormon colonies in Mexico#:~:text=The Mormon colonies in Mexico,LDS Church) beginning in 1885.

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The proposed changes are an excellent draft. The sources used, tone, and overall content of the information written all seem to be in line with Wikipedia’s guidelines. I especially appreciate the flow of the article and the amount of information contained in a short space. Moving forward, naturally, adding the section on the contributions of the colonies should be prioritized. I do not have any immediate suggestions on anything that needs to be changed in the current draft. Adding the next section and any additional sources that are utilized will result in a great final draft.

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?
JohnFrum1441
Link to draft you're reviewing
User:JohnFrum1441/Mormon colonies in Mexico
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Mormon colonies in Mexico#:~:text=The Mormon colonies in Mexico,LDS Church) beginning in 1885.

Evaluate the drafted changes

The proposed changes are an excellent draft. The sources used, tone, and overall content of the information written all seem to be in line with Wikipedia’s guidelines. I especially appreciate the flow of the article and the amount of information contained in a short space. Moving forward, naturally, adding the section on the contributions of the colonies should be prioritized. I do not have any immediate suggestions on anything that needs to be changed in the current draft. Adding the next section and any additional sources that are utilized will result in a great final draft.


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