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ileon2019

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Editing User:Ileon2019/Spinal cord injury research - Wikipedia
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Spinal cord injury research - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes

The draft was very good. The grammar portion was correct. At times, I think part of the article could have used a little more "explanation'. For instance, the Pathophysiology section contained a lot of terms that might not be familiar to a new reader. I understand that it is a more difficult topic, but maybe a definition link would be useful for some terms.

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

ileon2019

Link to draft you're reviewing
Editing User:Ileon2019/Spinal cord injury research - Wikipedia
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Spinal cord injury research - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes

The draft was very good. The grammar portion was correct. At times, I think part of the article could have used a little more "explanation'. For instance, the Pathophysiology section contained a lot of terms that might not be familiar to a new reader. I understand that it is a more difficult topic, but maybe a definition link would be useful for some terms.


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