Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
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HandsomeSquidward311
Hello! I like the article you are creating and the progress you have so far. I think your headers are a great start, especially interested to read what you write in redlining.
The history of minority groups heading have a lot of potential as well.
I like your start for the description of food apartheid. I do think you could create a more concise first sentence, as it is the firth thing that people read on a good search. The description is great, just needs a strong intro for an initial search.
I like the source you include, but following wikis suggestions I think you should try to include more sources
Overall, great job!
Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional Resources |
HandsomeSquidward311
Hello! I like the article you are creating and the progress you have so far. I think your headers are a great start, especially interested to read what you write in redlining.
The history of minority groups heading have a lot of potential as well.
I like your start for the description of food apartheid. I do think you could create a more concise first sentence, as it is the firth thing that people read on a good search. The description is great, just needs a strong intro for an initial search.
I like the source you include, but following wikis suggestions I think you should try to include more sources
Overall, great job!