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Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
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Georgia Leakey
I think that you added way more information to the Walls and gates section than what was given previously. How did you find the sources that you came up with? How are you certain that these sources are factual? What made you decide to edit this section in particular?
I've noticed that you added more information about the design of each wall and gate. Great job in mentioning the reconstruction of the gates. That adds context to facts about its upkeep.
I would recommend that you separate the sections into separate parts that describe each wall and gate that you're referencing.
![]() | Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional Resources |
Georgia Leakey
I think that you added way more information to the Walls and gates section than what was given previously. How did you find the sources that you came up with? How are you certain that these sources are factual? What made you decide to edit this section in particular?
I've noticed that you added more information about the design of each wall and gate. Great job in mentioning the reconstruction of the gates. That adds context to facts about its upkeep.
I would recommend that you separate the sections into separate parts that describe each wall and gate that you're referencing.