Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Article title

Carbon Border Adjustment Mechanism

Article Evaluation

• The lead section appears to be the entirety of the article.
• Has an ample amount of sources, just needs more content.
• Does not contain any images.
• Maintains a neutral tone, does not seem to contain any biases or persuasive vocabulary.
• Simple and to the point.
• Contains sources outside of other wikipedia articles which is good.
• Flows nicely, grammar and spelling appears to be good.
• Needs work but it's off to a good start, definitely a good foundation for the topic.

Sources

1. "The proposal for a Carbon Border Adjustment Mechanism fails the ambition and equity tests | Heinrich Böll Stiftung | Brussels office - European Union". Heinrich-Böll-Stiftung. Retrieved 2021-10-03.
2. "Ministry urges firms to step up decarbonization - Taipei Times". www.taipeitimes.com. 2021-10-02. Retrieved 2021-10-03.
3. "OECD boss: Digital tax deal can inspire global deal on carbon pricing". POLITICO. 2021-09-14. Retrieved 2021-10-03.
4. "The EU Carbon Border Adjustment Mechanism : inspiration for others or Pandora's box?". www.engage.hoganlovells.com. Archived from the original on 2021-09-28. Retrieved 2021-11-22.
5. "A European Union Carbon Border Adjustment Mechanism: Implications for developing countries" (PDF). UNCTAD. Archived (PDF) from the original on 2021-07-14.
6. "The Carbon Border Adjustment Mechanism (CBAM)". www.ey.com. Retrieved 2021-10-03.
7. "Carbon Border Adjustment Mechanism (CBAM) will stem 'carbon leakage', European Commission tax and customs chief tells MEPs". The Parliament Magazine. 2021-09-13. Retrieved 2021-10-03.

Article title

Directorate-General for Climate Action

Article Evaluation

• Needs more than just a lead section.
• Right off the bat, appears to be very lacking in everything from content to sources.
• Needs at least two more sources that aren't other wikipedia articles.
• Needs a lot more content.
• Needs imagery.
• Good lack of bias or opinion, doesn't use persuasive vocabulary.
• Needs to explicitly define several of the terms being used.
• Not great, but not terrible; needs a lot of work.

Sources

1. "What we do", Climate Action, European Commission. Retrieved 6 July 2011.

Article title

Ecophobia

Article Evaluation

• Has a good lead section, however it contains a link to another wikipedia article that does not exits and therefore needs to be remedied.
• Has a Table of Contents which is extremely helpful.
• Has an ample amount of sources, does not need improvement in that section.
• Also includes a section for "Further reading," which allows readers to dive deeper into the topic if they choose.
• Because it references other wikipedia articles, it needs an "External Links" section as well.
• Good content, but more sections could be added that discuss the intersectionality between the topic and other related topics.
• Could add imagery.
• Contains some awkward sentences that require minor adjustments.
• Tone appears neutral, doesn't seem to contain any bias.
• Overall, a really good draft between the first draft and the final draft. Requires some minor tweaks but nothing huge.

Sources

1. "(Too) Little House on the (Verge of) Prairie ("Madness")". Psychology Today. Retrieved 2020-11-19.
2. Finnegan, William. "Homeschooling during coronavirus: five ways to teach children about climate change". The Conversation. Retrieved 2020-08-10.
3. "Ecophobia: What Is It, and Why Is It on the Rise?". alive. 2017-11-01. Retrieved 2020-08-10.
4. Strife, Susan Jean (January 2012). "Children's Environmental Concerns: Expressing Ecophobia". The Journal of Environmental Education. 43 (1): 37–54. doi:10.1080/00958964.2011.602131. ISSN 0095-8964. S2CID 143525132.
5. McKnight, Diane M (August 2010). "Overcoming "ecophobia": fostering environmental empathy through narrative in children's science literature". Frontiers in Ecology and the Environment. 8 (6): e10–e15. doi:10.1890/100041. ISSN 1540-9295.
6. Finnegan, William. "Homeschooling during coronavirus: five ways to teach children about climate change". The Conversation. Retrieved 2020-11-19.
7. "In the Digital Age, How to Get Students Excited About Going Outdoors". KQED. Retrieved 2020-11-19.
8. Dewan, Shaila (2007-04-08). "Can Man Improve on Nature's Fishbowl? (Published 2007)". The New York Times. ISSN 0362-4331. Retrieved 2020-11-19.
9. "What is oikophobia or ecophobia? What has that got to do with COVID-19 or coronavirus pandemic?". www.timesnownews.com. Retrieved 2020-11-19.
10. "Unified Architectural Theory: Chapter 5". ArchDaily. 2014-06-08. Retrieved 2020-11-19.
11. Estok, Simon C. (2021). "Ecophobia and Covid-19". International Journal of Fear Studies. 3 (2): 90–99.
12. Akıllı, Sinan (2021). Turkish Ecocriticism: From Neolithic to Contemporary Timescapes. NY: Lexington Books.
13. Estok, Simon (2011). Literatures, Cultures, and the Environment : Dramatizing Environmental Fear: King Lear's Unpredictable Natural Spaces and Domestic Places. NY: Palgrave Macmillan. ISBN 978-0-230-11874-4.
14. Estok, S.C. (2011). Monstrosity in Othello and Pericles: Race, Gender, and Ecophobia In: Ecocriticism and Shakespeare. Literatures, Cultures, and the Environment. Palgrave Macmillan, New York.

Article title

Glasgow Climate Pact

Article Evaluation

• Lead section is pretty solid.
• Content appears correct, could use some more details.
• Has an appropriate amount of sources that aren't other wikipedia articles.
• Needs imagery.
• Good grammar, sentences flow nicely.
• Overall a pretty good article, no bias is present. Just appears to be lacking slightly content-wise, but a solid foundation on the topic.

Sources

Rincon, Paul (2021-11-14). "COP26

1. New global climate deal struck in Glasgow". BBC News.
2. FCCC, PA. "Conference of the Parties serving as the meeting of the Parties" (PDF). Retrieved 2021-11-14.
3. Volcovici, Valerie; Abnett, Kate; James, William (2021-11-14). "U.N. climate agreement clinched after late drama over coal". Reuters. Retrieved 2021-11-14.
4. "Last-minute coal compromise in climate deal disappoints many at COP26". CBC News. The Associated Press. 2021-11-13. Retrieved 2021-11-14.
5. "Is carbon capture too expensive? – Analysis". IEA. Retrieved 2021-11-18.
6. "World heading for 2.4C global warming - report". 2021-11-09.
7. "India pledges net-zero emissions by 2070 — but also wants to expand coal mining". NPR. 2021-11-03.
8. "COP26: Deal to end car emissions by 2040 idles as motor giants refuse to sign". Financial Times. 2021-11-08.
9. "COP26: Every carmaker that pledged to stop selling fossil-fuel vehicles by 2040". CarExpert. 2021-11-11.
10. "COP26: Germany fails to sign up to 2040 combustion engine phaseout". Deutsche Welle. 2021-11-10.
11. Avanti, Pedro. "UN climate boss: 'Good compromise' beats no deal on warming". The Independent. Retrieved 2021-11-14.

Article title

International Day of Awareness of Food Waste and Loss

Article Evaluation

• Needs a lead section that is separate from the following paragraphs.
• Seems to be lacking in content.
• Needs imagery.
• Awkward sentences, needs small grammar adjustments.
• Doesn't appear to contain any opinions or bias.
• Has a good amount of sources that appear to be accurately cited.
• Overall a good first draft, needs content and editing but not a bad start.

Sources

1. "What's the Difference Between Food Waste and Food Loss?". The Spoon. 23 September 2020. Retrieved 19 October 2021.
2. "International Day of Awareness of Food Loss and Waste". European Commission. Retrieved 19 October 2021. Text was copied from this source, which is available under a Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International License.
3. "International Day of Awareness on Food Loss and Waste Reduction". Riverine Herald. 24 September 2021. Retrieved 19 October 2021.
4. Varela, Vicky Brown (28 September 2021). "12 Apps Preventing Food Waste and Protecting the Planet". Food Tank. Retrieved 19 October 2021.
5. News, Mirage (29 September 2021). "How technology can help avert food waste". Mirage News. Retrieved 19 October 2021.
6. Everett, Helena (16 October 2021). "Bonnie Wright Teams Up with Food Waste App Too Good to Go". MuggleNet. Retrieved 19 October 2021.
7. "Sept. 29 is International Day of Awareness on Food Loss and Waste Reduction". The Spoon. 28 September 2020. Retrieved 19 October 2021.