2022/11/06 Second Peer Review
Good use of linking to other articles
Maybe explain what the "vomeronasal organ" is in a sentence or two
So far this looks really great. Grammatically it looks good as well. You do a great job of showcasing the chemical ecology side of the Asian Elephants. The two paragraphs you mentioned adding will also add a lot of chemical ecology relevant information. Great job so far! If you want me to read over it again before you transfer your entire project just slack me! Great job so far!!
First Peer Review
This is overall a good start. I think you did a good job of giving the overall reproduction summary. I know you had a couple of spots were you wanted to add more information, I would just make sure to add specifics about how those chemicals interact with one another through their chemical allelopathy or overall chemical interactions and the benefit of these chemicals and why they are so essential. I think you also did a great job of linking articles, which makes it a lot easier to understand. Great work!
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Eb1002
Thank you so much for your feedback! I will be sure to include more chemical specific information in my final product.
2022/11/06 Second Peer Review
Good use of linking to other articles
Maybe explain what the "vomeronasal organ" is in a sentence or two
So far this looks really great. Grammatically it looks good as well. You do a great job of showcasing the chemical ecology side of the Asian Elephants. The two paragraphs you mentioned adding will also add a lot of chemical ecology relevant information. Great job so far! If you want me to read over it again before you transfer your entire project just slack me! Great job so far!!
First Peer Review
This is overall a good start. I think you did a good job of giving the overall reproduction summary. I know you had a couple of spots were you wanted to add more information, I would just make sure to add specifics about how those chemicals interact with one another through their chemical allelopathy or overall chemical interactions and the benefit of these chemicals and why they are so essential. I think you also did a great job of linking articles, which makes it a lot easier to understand. Great work!
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Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional Resources |
Eb1002
Thank you so much for your feedback! I will be sure to include more chemical specific information in my final product.