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DanielCC1999

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User:DanielCC1999/Konjo language (Bantu)
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Konjo language (Bantu)

Evaluate the drafted changes

  • The table you included is well organized and provides clear and relevant information to the topic.
  • You cited two reliable sources.
  • However, the new information you added to the article lacks substance. While the table is a great overview, you might also think about briefly describing anything interesting that can be perceived when looking at the classifications. Further, try finding new sections that you want to add to the article about the language and sources that support these aspects. The current version lacks plenty of information concerning categories like geographic distribution, history, or prototypes-language reconstruction so you might try starting there. To make the article look more "full" you could also consider adding a map of area(s) where the language is spoken and elaborate on that.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

DanielCC1999

Link to draft you're reviewing
User:DanielCC1999/Konjo language (Bantu)
/info/en/?search=User:DanielCC1999/Konjo_language_%28Bantu%29/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Konjo language (Bantu)

Evaluate the drafted changes

  • The table you included is well organized and provides clear and relevant information to the topic.
  • You cited two reliable sources.
  • However, the new information you added to the article lacks substance. While the table is a great overview, you might also think about briefly describing anything interesting that can be perceived when looking at the classifications. Further, try finding new sections that you want to add to the article about the language and sources that support these aspects. The current version lacks plenty of information concerning categories like geographic distribution, history, or prototypes-language reconstruction so you might try starting there. To make the article look more "full" you could also consider adding a map of area(s) where the language is spoken and elaborate on that.

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